ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Hi! My name is Jasmine Batey, I was born in '94, so at the moment I'm 16, I enjoy writing poetry, lyrics and stories, I love listening to music, mainly rock and all of it's sub - genres, and i REALLY LOVE getting comments on story mania! so please leave feedback and I will update regularly! enjoy reading! [January 2011]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (31) Before The Hero (Poetry) i don't know where to go with it after this [36 words] Don't Let Me Drown (Poetry) - [43 words] Ever Again. (Poetry) um.... i was angry... and yes -it is about murder. [78 words] Every One Leaves (Poetry) just a poem about how i feel sometimes. [32 words] Every Things Alright (Poetry) - [110 words] God, If You're Up There... (Poetry) My prayer [39 words] Heaven... (Poetry) Another little poem about BOTHE suicide AND love. [140 words] I Love You Baby (Poetry) A small love poem [107 words] I Want You To See Me (Poetry) - [102 words] Is It Worth Being Alone? (Poetry) Again, a sneak peak into my Life [89 words] Jack The Ripper (Poetry) a small jokey poem, written for fun as a tongue-in-cheek thing. as the title says, It's about Jack the Ripper. [77 words] Just Open My Eyes (Poetry) - [135 words] Love Is A Despair (Poetry) - [92 words] My Release (Poetry) a small poem about cutting (as you probably guessed) I know some one cutting and thats what inspired it. [75 words] Nothings Wrong (Poetry) an inside view of me [13 words] Numb (Poetry) To a certain someone, you really hurt me. [43 words] One Of These Days (Poetry) I was dared to write a poem about a smile, I doubt that this is what she had in mind, but it IS a poem about a smile, so here is a poem, and i have 'Frankie' to thank for it. So thank you Frankie. [86 words] Pain. Betrayal. Hurt. Anger.... (Poetry) just a poem about how i feel sometimes... [29 words] Right Through Me (Poetry) - [161 words] Saving Grace (Songs) Love again -- funny, my songs are about love and my poetry death.... hmmmm [84 words] Take You Back Again (Poetry) - [119 words] The Cloud (Poetry) again, a challenge I accepted from Frankie, the beginning is a bit bodgy, (the first stanza) anyway, please leave advice and comments, and I hope you like! [121 words] The Devil Laughs (Poetry) - [85 words] The Nightmares (Why) (Poetry) - [61 words] The Only Casualty (Poetry) a small poem I wrote this morning -- haven't completed one about a smile yet but working on it!! -- It's not one of my best, it was a rush job so any feedback is not only welcome, but wanted. [59 words] The Rose - By Jasmine Batey (Poetry) A story of love, a rose, and in a way, a story about love. [62 words] The Screaming, The Anger, The Hurt And The Pain (Poetry) hope you enjoy and please comment -- not one of my best [108 words] To My Sister (Poetry) basically a letter to my sister that im not brave enoug to deliver to her myself. [200 words] When Summer Comes Again (Poetry) a small HAPPY poem :) [97 words] Why The Gun? (Poetry) Just a small poem [95 words] You Are The Beat (Poetry) This could also be transformed into a song...? About ome one famous -- see if you can guess who =P [84 words]
Because You Jasmine P Batey
Now I'm in a crinkle
Only you can straiten out
And now I’m drowning
In a sea of confusion
And now I'm dying
To talk to someone
My head is screaming
My heart is crying
But the person who can fix it is you
And you’re too far away to hear me
The person who can fix it is you
But you don’t know what I'm going through
The person who can fix it is you
But what can I say,
When you don’t know I love you?
My mind struggles
And logic fails me
But what can I do?
You don’t know
I need to talk
I need to let it out
But insecurity wins
And I’m still twisted inside
CHORUS
so now what?
You don’t know,
I'm dying to be noticed
Yet your blind eyes miss me
CHORUS
I need help, but where can I get it?
I need help but I cant find it,
So notice me please
And smooth out my life.
CHORUS
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But you don't know I love you
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"It seems like I know you or something...because we have wayy too much in common. I've read some of your other pieces, and it's like we are the same person..." -- Kris.
"Hey thanks! feel free to email me if you want! we could be friends if we're so alike! Jasminebatey@hotmail.com" -- Jasmine, The Auther.
"Yo! Dat would be sweet. Yeah! Ima hit you up! Haha. Peace. See you on email, girl!" -- Angel of Hope.
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