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I Wish This Girl Was Mine
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TITLE (EDIT)
I Wish This Girl Was Mine |
DESCRIPTION
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[176 words] |
AUTHOR
Donna Leigh Dennison |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Greetings Y'all...my submissions on here come from South Alabama, so anything you read of mine on this site you can pretty much relate it to country.....
[October 2004] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
nlite727@hotmail.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (4)
Baby Please Don't Go (Songs) A girl leaving.....tired of being hurt...holding her head up high like a woman should....a man realizing he screwed up with her..... [171 words] [Relationships]
My Heart Can Never Mend (Songs) This is just about the hard feelings of hurting and believing the other side cannot understand the pain. [152 words] [Relationships]
Tell Me Why My Heart Hurts (Songs) Just another hurting song....please people, before you critique me too bad, please hear it as slow (country of course) [116 words] [Relationships]
The Pillow (Songs) Lonely nights of being a trucker's wife. [114 words]
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I Wish This Girl Was Mine
Donna Leigh Dennison
A hard workin' woman and southern at that
Is hard to find these days
One that's faithful, strong and committed
And lives the southern ways....
You might see her out on her boat
Bringing in snapper on her line
She ain't afraid to bait it, clean it or cook it,
This southern girl sure is fine....I wish this girl was mine...
and...
She's a pretty Georgia Peach in a pickup truck
You might catch her eye with a little bit of luck
She's against abortion, politics, fake women and war
And she's southern to the core
There's a southern girl living next door.
You may see this lady every now and then
Living it up on the town
But she works hard all the time
And no one gets her down
She'll work from sunup 'til sundown
And always has that shine
She ain't picky, modest, stubborn or tricky
This southern girl sure is fine....I wish this girl was mine...
and...
She's a pretty Georgia Peach in a pickup truck
You might catch her eye with a little bit of luck
She's against abortion, politics, fake women and war
And she's southern to the core
There's a southern girl living next door.
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READER'S REVIEWS (7)
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"I'm not a songwriter by any stretch of the imagination, but I do enjoy music and I think these lyrics are great. They seem to fit the genre of the time i.e. talking about the empowerment of the Southern Woman,of which I am one, and for that I love it!" -- D. G. Williford.
"good to see a new voice, especially a southern one, God did grant them special qualities. liked this one, good work." -- echo.
"I loved this just as much as I love southern women...they are the peaches of life!" -- e. rocco caldwell.
"Really nice job...get a guitar and you're in business. See ya!!!" -- km.
"Deb...you live in the south? Me too!" -- km.
"Not bad, might need to be polished a bit if you're planning on using it as a song." -- kavya.
"It's a real good start, but it's a little "choppy" and lacks a natural rhythm due to a mixture of short and long stanza lines. Edit until you can tap out a beat as you read it, this is constructive advice not criticism." -- Brion' O Neil.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2004 Donna Leigh Dennison |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
October 2004 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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