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ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am a 15 year old living in Manitoba. That's all I can really say about myself. [April 2005]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (3) Our Lives (Poetry) Wrote this today when me and one of my friends were talking about an old friend of mine... [177 words] Paper Cuts (Poetry) Wrote this when I was feeling down about a friend. [156 words] Silences Forgotten (Poetry) This one is about my uncle who got himself into some bad stuff... [68 words]
Broken Cinderella Melanie Geeregat
(jewllery box music)
(jewllery box music gets heavier and is played by guitars[for every verse])
broken, seething, in a world so deceiving
crying, mocking, with out a single word we're talking
I've locked my laughter up, but threw away the key
I just keep screaming for someone to save me
[whispered] please save me
(For Elise, heavy and played by guitars)
[chorus]:
Can't you hear my whispers calling
Needing you and now I'm falling
Deeper into this life I'm living
Watching you and now I'm screaming
There's no fairy tale for a broken Cinderella
Kiss my lips for the last time that you'll know
I've never come this far, the pain that comes will never show
As long as I smile it's all ok
But please give me some love
[whispered] I need real love
[chorus]
LOOK AT YOU CINDERELLA NOW
DOES SHE LOOK PRETTIER AS SHE FALLS
WILL SHE BE BEAUTIFUL ONCE SHE'S DOWN?
THERE WERE JUST A FEW NEEDS
COULD YOU NOT FULFILL HER DREAMS?
[chorus]
broken, so broken, a broken....
Cinderella
READER'S REVIEWS (4) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"Beautiful, Melanie. *sniff* So true. So true for so many little girls, isn't it? Take care, keep writing." -- Desi.
"parts of this had real good flow but other parts were hard to follow . i wasn't crazy about the title but this is your song .great potential .good work" -- fh, canada.
"i duno, i'd have to disagree with 'fh canada' the title suited the piece very well, great work i luv'd it i'd like to hear it in real life.. congrats and keep it up, hope u feeling better asap.." -- baker.
"omg! i really wanna hear this w/ music! i think it would sound totally awesome!!!" -- Lauren.
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