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21 Days( Away From You) Fred Hardy
lying awake in this lonely bed
watching the clock at 3 AM
waiting for the sun to rise up and I
can't stop thinking about you again
they told me this wouldn't take to long
a couple of days and we'd be gone
but I'm still here somewhere in mexico
we might not be done but I' ve got to go
got to find a way to get back home
can't spend another moment,all alone (without you)
cause it's been
chorus
so long since I've seen your face
it's been
to long since I had my last taste
it's been
twenty one days and I just can't wait
it's been
twenty one days away way way
it's been
twenty one days away from you
twenty one long days away from you
the very last time I touched you
was the very last time I dreamed
now I all these feelings they
keep on pouring out of me
and working everyday from six to nine
thinking about you going out of my mind
last thing they said, if I walk I'm done
but I just can't be away from the one (I love)
I got to find a way ,got to get back home
can't spend another moment all alone (without you)
cause it's been
c
so long since I've seen your face
it's been
to long since I had my last taste
it's been
twenty one days and I just can't wait
it's been
twenty one days away way way
it's been
twenty one days away from you
twenty one long days away from you
bridge
and when I finaly see your smile
the one that's been missing in my eyes
going to hold you there in my arms
and then tell you how long
it's been
twenty one days
since I've seen your face
it's been
twenty one days
since I had my last taste
it's been
twenty one days
and I just can't wait
it's been
twenty one days away way way
it's been
twenty one days away from you
twenty one long days away from you
(repeat and fade )
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"this is really sweet. i wrote a poem a while back called 21 times...check it out. " -- km.
"thanks for checking this out need to make some small ajustments but really it's just one of those missing you type songs thanks again I'll check out that poem ,take it easy" -- fh, canada.
"Fred this is really good. I like that is sexual but not raunchy. Ya know?" -- Mitch.
"thanks Mitch ,haven't seen you in a while hope to see you post something soon" -- fh, canada.
"I am really liking your skills. Please get in touch. I have a few things to go through with you. HunterOfTheHunters@hotmail.co.uk." -- Jak Balshaw, UK.
"i loved this one.. i know that feeling.. wanting to be back home with the one you love... this summer was away for a month... 300 miles from my home... " -- Carla Thomson.
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