AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (45) Baby Brother (Poetry) This is a poem for my brother who died in my moms stomach when I was about 7 [103 words] Back To Ashes (Poetry) - [130 words] Bad Dreams (Songs) Sumthing saying what I feel toward a person who just plays games... [89 words] Between Death And Life (Songs) This one is about how people should think before they commit suicide cause they think its all over but all thehy did was hurt everyone around them... [264 words] Creative Forms Of Poetry (Poetry) This is an assignment for my english class, It's a variaty of different poems written in different forms. Even if they are short, they have good meanings behind them. [155 words] Daddy Come Back (Poetry) A poem dedicated to my dad who I havent seen since I was like 7 years old. [96 words] Don't Lie (Songs) This is a song I just wrote for fun so if you dont really like this one it's okay... I don't like it that much either but its okay. [137 words] Fallen Rose (Songs) Who I am is represented by a rose. [168 words] How It Is To Be Me (Poetry) A poem on how I feel through out my life. [141 words] I Cannot Believe (Songs) Its just a great rock song lol telling about how people lose or just go wrong in some part. [130 words] I Died For You (Poetry) A poem talking about how much you love someone that you would do some horrible things just for them to know how much you love them! [126 words] I Have My Own Dream... (Essays) - [497 words] I Think Of Life (Songs) Theres not much to say about this song its just what every girl goes through.!.!.! [365 words] I Want To Be With You (Songs) This is my first song... I wrote it on September 27 2002... and it's very different to other of my songs because this one is more about relationships... it's not like my other songs "a place of darkne... [184 words] Live Life Rock N Roll (Songs) THIS ONE IS FOR MY BAND!!! Luv You GUYS! [222 words] Losing You (Songs) A song how it feels to lose sumone or sumones trust. [132 words] - Lost And Confused - (Songs) It's a song that can show what a teenager like me mostly always is think about and why most teens go through depression... [177 words] Meaning Of Life (Songs) - [187 words] Memories (Songs) This is a song that talks about how anything (good or bad) is always left behind... even if you don't want to forget about it! [152 words] My Own War Zone (Songs) WAR SUCKS!!! IT REALLY SUCKS!!! [178 words] Nothing To Remember (Songs) This song is pretty much what a girl is always asking... does he like me or not?!?... [164 words] Our Style (Songs) Dis right here is a rhyme done by my boy SPIDA over at da BAHAMAS!! LUV YA!...I just added one or two things here and there! PEACE! [274 words] Problems In And Out Of My Head (Songs) A song on how daily life problems can harm you and others. [169 words] Punk, Anarchy, Chaos!! 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[74 words] What Is Love? Love Is... (Poetry) It's a poem talking about what love is and what love does to you! [76 words] Why Can't I Have You (Poetry) Its a poem about a girl who really likes this guy but the guy doesnt really care about her so she put her life to an end at the same moment that the phone rang and it was the guy she liked... and no t... [113 words] - You Showed Me - (Songs) This song is about a person who could really change ur life and change the way you act and feel... A good ROCK SONG!! [193 words] Your Baby (Poetry) - [76 words] You've Lost (Songs) Its a song that is talking about how some times a guy takes advantage of a girl and this song is saying a girl can always win the game HEHE! [248 words] -Anger- (Poetry) This poem is dedicated to all our enemies! YEAH ;) LOL it's about our anger against them. [63 words] -Crazy- (Songs) It talks about how someone feels when everyone around them is just against them and they feel like they are going crazy! [210 words] -Don't Worry- (Songs) A song for a very good friend, John! [124 words] -Feel Like Letting Go- (Songs) It's a song that is telling how some people just dont care anymore and can't live in a world like this cause their always being hurt. [193 words] -Rocking- (Songs) It's a weird song I know but hey its a song telling everyone that im 100 percent sure i'll make it big! [148 words] -Stuck On An Island- (Songs) Its a song talking about how sometimes people lose faith in their dreams including people around them and they forget about their dreams! [222 words] -What Your Not- (Songs) It's a song dedicated to someone I know but I don't really want to say their name or anything cause that wouldnt be cool... It's a song telling people not to be what they arent to fit in like do drugs... [215 words] -You Don't Care- (Songs) Its a song on how guys suck! LOL [158 words]
A Place Of Darkness Karina Lizet Perez
I’m stuck in this dark room, This is where life took me with no lights, no I can't see... no I can’t see...life took me down took me to the ground.
I can’t find where I belong, I’m lost in this place of darkness... I can’t find my way all these walls are blocking me...
Chained down to the ground of my closet door...I try to make it fine but I’m in this place of darkness where I can only hide.
I’m a prisoner of my own mind I can’t find where I belong, I’m lost in a place of darkness...chained down! Locked up! I’m stuck here even if I try!
I don’t know where I belong I’m stuck in a place so dark, I can’t see.
I’m trying to make it work for me... I’m trying to make it fine But for now I’m stuck in a place of darkness where I’m trying to let life help me up the ground...and of these chains...
I can’t believe it all worked out I made it through the dark, I made it to the life I was searching for...
READER'S REVIEWS (11) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"Very good work. It is very well written and I can totally see it as a song on the lines of Boxcar Racer, Blink 182 or Sum41. " -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"Good work, well written, could definitely see this one on the charts !!! " -- Judith .
"YEAH KARINA!! U GO GRRL!!! THEY ARE ALL GOOD!!!!!! :):)" -- Kristen, Nipawin, SASK, Canada.
"KArina I think u have a lot a talent and I hope ur dream come true and I'm very fortunate to be ur friend, so keep going gurl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" -- Vanessa.
"hi karina, i think you would make a really good song writter keep on doing it ok bye tals to you later" -- Anakaren.
"I love this song!!!" -- Bianca, National City, CA, USA.
"I like this song a lot, like I've told you a long time ago. I like the subject ad the words you're using. And "dark room"..... lol" -- John Goedhart, Amsterdam, NH, the Netherlands.
"very very good very enerjetic writing good lyrics" -- josh, tehachapi, ca, usa.
"yo karina, your song is very creative, fa real, please perform it in the bahamas, sometime. u gat alot of skillz. keep workin hard and u'll get there. nuff love from your new bahamian fan. spida (g.c) BIGG UP BOOP!" -- sPiDa, freeprt, BAHAMAS, BaHaMaS.
"You have a lot of songs you've written! I wish I could write like you. I think your song is nice but it's more poetic than lyrical. In terms of structure it's hard to get some understanding as to where the verse leaves off and the chorus begans or whether it's a ABAB, AABA or what or a song with a two-line bridge thrown in! Sounds personal to me, poetic however. " -- Wesley McCants, Cincinnati, Ohio, USA.
"Titles and organization is there, but without rhyme it is not a lyric...I don't make the rules, but that's the biggest one among others, that are not present in the bodies of your work...a chorus which must include the title.These are the criteria set by the music industry, but if you only want to be a "Mania" writer, it doesn't matter." -- Brian O Neil.
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