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Alphabet Tamsin Butler
Zebra skin throws were strewn over the sofas of the young woman's flat, it was like an x-ray into her existence, over the top and covering the thread bare base. Things cluttered the small interior, seeming meaningless on first glance but showing their deeper meaning when studied closer.The very fabric of her exitence seemed to be woven into the flat she hid herself away in. Very few people seemed to see the real her under the painted exterior of the highly professional business woman. She was all sharp suits and perfect make-up, but underneath she was almost a fragile child. Growing up she had never seen why she was different from all the other children even now she had the same childhood feeling with her. Taunts were like her childhood rhymes and bullying was like her best friend at playtimes. Even as a little girl she had dreamed of a knight in white armour to ride in and carry her away, as she grew up she realised that it was a dream and that was all. If she wanted something in life she had to do it herself so she had trained in business and set up her own business making dreams happen for others, she sold unknown bands to the nations.
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"It strats off really nicely and became intriguing; I wanted to get to know her more, but I feel it becomes a bit hurried and you lose track of the story and focus more on the letters. It's a work in progress though and I believe it's got solid foundations! Keep it up! :)" -- Peter.
"Thanks for the comment Peter I will try to focus more on the story, thanks for the encouragement. :)" -- Tamsin Butler.
"I have to agree with other Peter! It is really well written up to about the last two sentences when it gathers speed and seems hurried, like it's written in the dying moments of an exam! Definitely keep working on it - I'll be back!! :)" -- Peter Halpin, London, UK.
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