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Trying to capture the essence of boredom through nature references. Not entirely convinced I've achieved it, what do you think?! [64 words]
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Bored Clouds Of A Scattered Sky J L Watts
Pebble peppered clouds
A frosty lake
The world continues ignorant
While I sleep.
Rain like daggers upon the road
An absent lane
I lie stiff and awake
Motionless self made tunnel.
Yellow stars, piercing in the sky
A dark expanse.
A picture of days gone by
Captured moment of yesterday.
Mouth shaped like an O.
Seconds to minutes, minutes to hours.
Stretched out upon the bed.
Grey sky a reflection.
Wisps of smoke
A clattered cottage.
Smile from a loved one
Brief respite.
READER'S REVIEWS (3) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"I`m not sure boredom comes across - more the inability to act, or commit maybe, or just get up! Anyway, I think this is rather marvellous, although I don`t like the "mouth shaped like an O" line, for some reason." -- Peter Rivendell.
"I agree. It doesn't strike me as boredom...." -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"*****This sounds a bit like when I *try* to get up in the morning." -- d donely.
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