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Bpd: Danger Rising-Part 1 |
DESCRIPTION
This is the fifth book in the series that used to go by the name of "Smith & Ronalds". I changed it becuase other characters are playing a bigger role in the story than before. The story picks up right where 'Origins & Conclusions' left off. Ella Begri has gone missing, and is beleived dead. Carrie Moss and Hector Stone go one way, to seek out someone from Hector's past. Trevor and Cedric are both off in different places as well, trying to track down the people who kidnapped David Ronalds. Ella is forced to brave many dangers, and try her best to get herself out of what could be a fatal situation. All of this group of friends are going to have to see through all of the chaos and somehow also rescue David from a person who they used to call their friend. This is the first half of this book...
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AUTHOR
Patrick Collins |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am a 15 year old writer from Indianapolis, Indiana. I write poems, books, and songs. But my greatest passion is for film. My intrests range from Harry Potter, to Tarantino, to Billy Joel. I hope every one enjoys my work!
[February 2005] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (14)
As The Stars Streak By (Poetry) I A poem that is in my new book "BPD: Danger Rising". I figured I would post it by itself to see what people thought of it. Enjoy! [64 words] [Spiritual]
Depth (Poetry) A poem about trying to find out who you are and what you place in the world is, an eternal struggle that we all face. [145 words]
Light And Dark (Poetry) A peom about my greatest love: cinema. This poem is a celebration of the world of film. I hope you like it! [170 words]
On And Offf (Poetry) A poem about confusion and distress, and the struggle to overcome it. [180 words]
Significance-First Draft (Screenplays) The first draft of my script. It is the simple story of a teenage girl on a soccer team. May seem boring, but my sole mission in my sripts are to make stories that are almost completetley devoid of cl... [9,272 words] [Drama]
Smith & Ronalds: A Time Of Change (Novels) The third entry in the Smith & Ronalds series. It focuses on the 1996 presidental election. Hector, Trev, Dave, Carrie, and Cedric all have to cope with the dargerous side-effects of politics. [5,620 words] [Drama]
Smith & Ronalds: The Murder Of The Prisoners (Novels) The first story in my series. It is the story of two detectives who team with a Hematologist to stop a mysterious vigilante on the lose in Indiana. [9,467 words] [Crime]
Smith & Ronalds: The Shawdow In The Alley (Novels) My second re-post. It is the second volume in my sereie. It ounce again takes place at S3 of the Bloomington Police Department. Dave and Trev ounce again team with Dr. Hector Stone to track down a kil... [5,969 words] [Crime]
Smith & Ronalds-Origins & Conclusions (Novels) The fourth volume in my sereis, and the last one to go by 'Smith & Ronalds'. The story is as follows: Detectives Trevor E. Smith and David Ronalds team ounce again with Carrie B. Moss and Cedric Madis... [10,812 words] [Drama]
The Immortal Seed (Poetry) A poem about something that we all have within us, and something that aides us more then anything else. [149 words]
The Round Dams (Poetry) A poem about concealed sadness and the reluctance to let it free. [171 words]
Thirst (Poetry) "Why?": The universal question we all ask. When we ask that, we are often in need of something, something that is beyond our grasps. This poem is about that need we all feel, even if what that is is f... [90 words]
Where Have The Times Gone? (Poetry) A poem about the loss of something that was always uncertain. It is about what we sometime want to lose, but should never be lost: friendship. [128 words]
Winter To Spring (Poetry) A poem about hope, and the eduring power of the human spirit. [161 words]
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"Another solid entry in your series, Collins. This one, though, probably ranks as fourth or fifth in the overall series. It was good, but I liked parts one and four the best. Ok, here's my criticisms. There aren't too many of them. Ok, here goes: "there for making it easy to rob homes and banks and so on." That should read, 'therefore. "A long last, his desk-bell beeped." That should read, 'At long last...' "and I can hardly hear because...” He paused again. “...Because I am missing half of my ear." A person missing part of their ear has no bearing on their ability to hear. "Nobody in the world would even think one of America’s most wanted criminals." That should read, 'No one in the world would even think he was one of America's most wanted criminals.' "Finally, on the fifth day of him trip to Indiana..." That should read, '...on the fifth day of his trip...' "He got in his car (which had stolen of course)" That should read, 'which he had stolen of course...' "I was sent to kill you, you be honest, and kill you I shall." That should read, 'to be honest, and kill you I shall.' “A shooting has just accrued...” That should read, 'occured.' “To some it up...' That should read, 'To sum it up...' 'and through it down into the water...' That should read, 'and threw it down...' 'Ounce he was in the car I went further down the path to meet you a Silver Town,' That should read, 'at Silver Town...' “Instead of trying punish innocent people..." That should read, 'Instead of trying to punish...' "Silence. Quite." I think you mean here, 'Quiet.' Good job. Keep it up. " -- Michael Harris, Detroit, MI.
"Thanks again for your kind opnion. I never thought that anyone would come to like my works so well! Its great! I finished the Deluded Youth, but I havent had time to review it yet, but I will say I liked it alot. Yeah, I think the fact that I decided to post this when it was only half done was a bad idea. This was going to be my longest, but since you were reading all of my stuff, I decided to split it since it isn't finished yet. You can probably see already why I changed the name of the series, really Smith and Ronalds are hardly in this one, as a matter of fact, Ronalds is NOT in this one. I just might correct the ear thing, but you could always take it as him being frustrated and saying stuff to further his point a bit, bit I still might change it. You could probably see my Tarentino influence in this one, huh? With the non linear way I did it. I think this one was to try and make a turning point in the series, I don't know if I did it as well I as I would have liked, but oh well. See I am gradually shifting the story over so that it can run smoothly into my original movie plot, which will conclude the series." -- Collins.
"Ehmm..m. Sehr gut Seite! Ich sage innig..!:) bmw" -- BMW, ..., ..., ....
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© 2004 Patrick Collins |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
August 2004 |
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