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Bring You Down Brian C Lebron
vs.1
here we go
playing the roles
just like before
miles away,
back to the wall
on Saturday
(pre chorus)
it's just my luck
to play a clown
to play a fool
when you're around
(chorus)
and for now i'm here to stay
all the while you're away
then some words
are better left unsaid
buried somewhere in the past
vs.2
let it go...
i heard her say
to me once more
(pre chorus)
it's just my luck
to play a clown
to be the one
who brings you down
when you're around
(chorus)2x's
and for now i'm here to stay
all the while you're away
then some words
are better left unsaid
buried somewhere in the past
READER'S REVIEWS (3) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"I liked it, a little short but I guess a few songs do have limited lyrics and focus more on instrumental impact. Either away I enjoyed it" -- Rebecca.
"Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading your work, after all your lovely comments on my work. I loved it, nice choice of words, and as to the length of the lyrics, i think its fine, take songs like "Thoughtless" and "floyd" for instance, they are shortly lyricised, but sung slowly, so that there is a nice impact. Great work, keep it up, cant wait to read more from you." -- Josh / Axey.
"hey thank you both for the positive feedback.I really didn't know how well this would go over.When it comes to songs I'm usually more critical.I'm my own worst critic." -- Brian L.
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