If I Die by Colin Baker Inspired by a conversation one evening at bedtime between my 6 year old daughter and I. Suddenly, she ... [129 words]
A Fibber's Prayer by Colin Baker A short poem about making good some porkies. [291 words]
The Retrospective Chicken by Colin Baker Introspective journey of a chicken. [255 words]
Howling Dog by D G Williford What I hear tonight with senses heightened... [107 words]
Allusions And Musings by Gregory De Feo A collection of poems that mainly bypass consternation to express admiration, the Scrip... [1,223 words]
Pieces Of Time by M Q Walters Ramblings of a heart that cannot go back in time... [110 words]
Changing Of The Seasons by Dorothy Borden -This poem tell the story of growning up and old, and realizing that life has quickly p... [214 words]
Yours Personally by C M S Sharpe It's bout someone sitting down and taking the time out of their lives to make this most perfec... [307 words]
Your So Far Away by Danae Bonomini This 1 is about a guy I really like atm called bowen ;) his a good bloke... so I hope all youz... [117 words]
Your Local Sniper by John Roberts Freedom is often assumed but comes at a price that someone has to pay - someone just like you... [312 words]
You In My Life by Brittany Tellez Mostly about life and how its much easier when you have someone that you love. [72 words]
Years Of Love by John Roberts Another anniversary poem for you know who ! [100 words]
X-Ray My Heart by Dri - [150 words]
Without A Heart by C M S Sharpe It's kinda like 'well without this, then how could so-and-so happen?' lol jus read it. [50 words]
Why To Regret? by Dri - [216 words]
Why Should I Suffer? by Danae Bonomini - [107 words]
What Happened?? by Brittany Tellez As my life fell to pieces ....and all I could do was watch.please give it some reviews I love h... [83 words]
Waiting For Me by C M S Sharpe Thinking about what will happen in the future... What is in store? Something good? Something hor... [62 words]
Val by Carla Thomson - [85 words]
Unexcused Bane by Brien Larson About my parents. Again. [163 words]
Trucker Tony by John Roberts A short poem on the 'joys ? ' of being a trucker. Written with thoughts of my son Tony, who is an ... [249 words]
Tk by Carla Thomson - [204 words]
Three Little Important Words by John Roberts Short and succint ! [50 words]
This Weekend by Carla Thomson - [242 words]
There's Monsters In My Bedroom! by John Roberts A poem about the visions of childhood and how adults should not ignore their re... [181 words]
The Worst Day Ever by LoweE The worst day for a kid. [136 words]
The Wave by Danae Bonomini This poem is kinda weird..but I reeli lyk this 1!! only took me bout 5 minutes 2 write aswell :D so ye... [63 words]
The Mystery Of My Mind-Subtitle:The Things I've Tried by David Daniels I was just about to go to my son's baseball game when sud... [469 words]
The Break Up by Carla Thomson - [126 words]
The Best Of Me by Rae - [202 words]
Tears Without A Cause by C M S Sharpe Haven't you ever had those awkward moments with a loved one crying and you didn't know wh... [83 words]
Take Me Away by Brittany Tellez This is about a girl who feels like there is no reason for her to be alive...and that the only way... [106 words]
Summer Storm by Dorothy Borden - [98 words]
Soft by Rae - [115 words]
Sleeping Memories by Mary Tronti - [63 words]
Simply Love by John Roberts A love poem for my wife. [141 words]
Self Promotion by Richard L Minton This is a poem about someone who sees themself as what they are not, but claim to be. [39 words]
Ruby Drops by C M S Sharpe A regular everyday life of a slicer..... [90 words]
Reminder by Danae Bonomini - [100 words]
Reflections On Life by John Roberts A short poem, written late at night, reflecting on the life and thoughts of a mature person... [206 words]
Quinton by Carla Thomson - [194 words]
Pluck These Petals by C M S Sharpe Do you remember picking up a flower and picking its petals; saying "S/he loves me, s/he love... [52 words]
Planting A Weed by C M S Sharpe It's one of my many short poems... Talking about relationships. How you think they're gonna wor... [44 words]
Pink Roses In May by Mary Tronti - [108 words]
Pieces Of My Heart by M Q Walters Just a poem... pieces of my heart. [124 words]
Paperdoll by C M S Sharpe I don't really know how to describe...it.... Erm.. unless you guys can think of something...My ears a... [60 words]
Our First Kiss by John Roberts A poem of sweet memories. [66 words]
O Summer! How We Owe To You! by Sandeepan Sb Bose Angelwithfirewing It'a poem about the season SUMMER with a touich of romantic realization. [124 words]
Nature Of The Seasons by Carla Thomson - [62 words]
My Wonderful Gran-Son Arron by Amarjit Bhambra My first Gran-son....Ahhh. [23 words]
My Invisible Friend by John Roberts A poem about the perception of things from a childs viewpoint. [185 words]
My Gardener by M Q Walters - [51 words]
My Fairy Tale by C M S Sharpe Read and find out.. I don't really know how to describe it without spoiling it! [208 words]
My Death Letter by Bryan King After I died I still hated you, brother. [130 words]
My Apology by Robert Lil Rob Shemwell Since My father went to prison, I have acted out and took it out on my mom, this is my apology. [404 words]
Morning Dew Is Gone by Charles J Williams Think about it...reread it and think again...then look outside as the dew settles, open you... [32 words]
Moor Good Mornings by John Roberts Visual imagery of early morning on the moors. [142 words]
Moments Of Intimacy by Dri - [72 words]
Mitch Hodson by Danae Bonomini This is about ANOTHER guy...i rit it about a month or so ago tho so yeah...some bits of it I like ... [126 words]
Mental Torture by John Roberts A short humorous poem on the mental torture of modern life. [166 words]
Major Highs And Manic Lows by Ian Tronco - [95 words]
Magnetism by Buxton Not sure what this is about, just random poetry. [94 words]
Love's Vortex by John Roberts A poem for the special woman in my life. [141 words]
Love You More by Brittany Tellez The husband that gave me everything I wanted until he died. [109 words]
Life With No 'f' by C M S Sharpe Well let's see... Write out the word : LIFE Take the letter 'F' out and what do you get? [124 words]
Just Being A Woman by John Roberts A poem about the difficulties of being a woman? [98 words]
Just An Ordinary Day by Dri - [127 words]
July 27th by C M S Sharpe I typed up some stuff that I'd written recently... Enjoy or leave critism, I don't care. [413 words]
It's Lying There by Meria Osborn Everyone wants to be in love! [77 words]
It Takes Two by Dri - [163 words]
It Comes Out by Brittany Tellez Uh... I'm not really sure.its mostly about someone with nowhere to go. [24 words]
Impersonation by Aerial A Ace Ace I poem about a teenager who was cheated by her boyfriend. [82 words]
If You Like Me... by Thepratmeister A tone poem, thoughtfully composed by the Pratmeister in tranquil contemplation, whilst takin... [64 words]
If I Could... by Dri - [155 words]
I Still Love You So... by Dri A strange type of love, but it is still love, isn't it?:-) [193 words]
I Remember Eighteen by John Roberts A poem recalling the plans and pains of youth. [208 words]
I Remember Buddy Holly by John Roberts A poem of memories for the 'boomers' [308 words]
I Love The Way You Love Me by Dri - [127 words]
I Fight Life Tooth And Claw by Duke Sekhon - [147 words]
How, Why by Rebecca A Caine A poem about teenage angst and a girls troubles. [177 words]
How Do I Say It? by Carla Thomson - [133 words]
Hoping To Find Happiness Again by David Daniels Many years ago I was diagnosed with manic depression.These last couple of days I... [543 words]
Honesty Is Not The Best Policy by C M S Sharpe Regretting stupid things you say. [87 words]
Hometown Memories by Dri - [200 words]
His Last 3 Words by Brittany Tellez Its about me and my deciest husband and the three words he said the day that he died.please re... [172 words]
Her Soul Remains by C M S Sharpe Haven't you ever cared about a feminine a lot and suddenly they're gone? Death? Anything that ... [138 words]
He Loves Me,He Loves Me Not by Kasey Ann Miller Kinda like a girl gettin forced into things she doesnt wanna do by the one she love... [133 words]
Harbor Of Dreams by Dri - [77 words]
Gripping Grave by Buxton A dark, edge, of a poem...Welcome it, share it, fall in to a deep abyss and let it be your compa... [83 words]
Gettin Run By Racism by Bryan King The title speaks for it's self. [90 words]
Gettin Run By Racism Pt. 2 by Bryan King More... [95 words]
For My Mom by Bryan King - [59 words]
For Little Mary by Sharon Odonnell A poem. [167 words]
Fifty Comes Around by John Roberts For Jane on a momentous occasion. [144 words]
Exención De Amar by Davianna Morris Amor. [117 words]
Every Thing I Know by Nash Inspired by an old love letter read at the wrong time. [163 words]
Every Man by Tom Bomb - [63 words]
Ending Fear by Buxton A poem about feeling's that sometimes make us weak, and our ability to confront them through the po... [145 words]
Elusive Translucence by Tom Bomb - [87 words]
Elixer Of Life by Dorothy Borden - [103 words]
Dumped For The First Time by Carla Thomson - [134 words]
Drea by Carla Thomson - [209 words]
Diatribe Of An Emerging Scribe by John Roberts Ah - the joys and heartache of writing ! Where does it come from and why ? Ideas... [224 words]
Devoted Love by Dri - [155 words]
Day Of The Drunken One by David Daniels About 20 years ago I got engaged and my fiance and I threw ourselves a nice engagement p... [424 words]
Commuting Hell by John Roberts A poem in memory of many wasted mornings spent waiting for the train when I commuted to work in ... [211 words]
Comfort by Rae - [120 words]
Cheap And Nasty? by John Roberts A short poem with an ecological warning. [100 words]
Castle In The Air by Duke Sekhon - [143 words]
Carmen, Open That Door!
Call Of The Guardian by Robert E Higgins Story of a firefighter's view of duty. Inspired by the writers experience on September 11t... [388 words]
Cabal Of Cowards by John Roberts London 7/7 - the cowards strike again ! Let's not glorify them with any name other than what t... [216 words]
Build Them Up by Ashley Burdett My thoughts on the reflections of a condemned man listening to someone build his gallows. [131 words]
Brown Eyed Girl by John Roberts A poem for the woman in my life. [251 words]
Boy Confusion by Cecelia Cooke It's about my life and how I deal with boys I guess. [178 words]
Black Boots by Desi Williams This is to my sis. [94 words]
Beacon by Kayla Meadows I've had five weeks of college experience with more time to write than I expected. Being here has inspir... [83 words]
Autumn Hearts Fall by C M S Sharpe Talking about having love for someone that treats you terribly. [111 words]
Aura by Men Walkalone The energy that connects us all. In us. Spread by us. [51 words]
As Far As I Go, For Now! by Tom Bomb A horror poem...kinda. [233 words]
Are You Finally Coming Home? by Ashley Ann Park THIS IS ABOUT MY BOYFRIEND.HE WAS FORCED TO LEAVE ME AND MOVE TO GEORGIA.IT TORE U... [100 words]
Apparently, I've Gone Insane by David Daniels Just a pleasant little poem that came to me one night while listening to the radio... [296 words]
Anniversary For Maggie by John Roberts For Maggie - My Soul mate - My Best friend - My Lover - For the last 38 years - Ich Lieb... [89 words]
Angel Of The Morning by John Roberts A poem for a loved one. [122 words]
Africa - Where's The Gain ? by John Roberts A bit of a political rant - triggered by recent events and the coverage of Live 8 -... [174 words]
A Low Man by P J Llewellyn This poem illustrates the evils of 'The American Dream', inspired by my visit to New York where I tru... [120 words]
A Letter To My Father by Robert Lil Rob Shemwell I'm 15, my dad was just convicted of 2nd degree attempted murder on my mom, this is what ... [254 words]
A Few Words Away by C M S Sharpe It's about those moments in life where after you were with someone, you're thinking back and r... [88 words]
Go to page: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 [112] 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163
| |
TITLE (EDIT)
Carmen, Open That Door! |
DESCRIPTION
A discreet poem about..well Im not going to spoil it, but it's cool.
[293 words] |
TITLE KEYWORD
Mind |
AUTHOR
Sasu |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
-
[November 2006] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (49)
Angry Fever (Poetry) Rarrrrg. [75 words]
Apple (Poetry) - [156 words] [Thriller]
Ask You (Poetry) - [133 words]
Balanced (Essays) - [65 words] [Mind]
Brighter Than The Eye (Poetry) - [54 words] [Motivational]
Cancel The Order (Poetry) My first entry. Please be kind.. [114 words] [Romance]
Code Of Deadjerry (Poetry) A code to go by. [156 words] [Popular Fiction]
Deaths Door On The Gallipoli (Poetry) It's 1915, I sit in the trenches on the Aegean coast of Suvla Bay. Waiting for my enemy to rouse my fear. [430 words] [Biography]
Deep Hole, Dirty Dust. (Poetry) A wizard is trapped inside his own mind. The key is no-where to be seen. [93 words] [History]
Divinity (Poetry) ? [65 words] [Mystery]
Don't Stand There ! (Poetry) - [49 words]
End This... (Poetry) - [74 words] [Mind]
Every Pressure (Poetry) - [180 words] [Relationships]
Free Will, Dark Night (Poetry) - [84 words]
Go On Without Me. (Songs) - [85 words] [Nature]
Guessing Game (Poetry) - [109 words] [Mystery]
Halo (Poetry) - [72 words] [Art]
Happy Moth (Poetry) Can you feel deprivation creeping up on you... [69 words] [Architecture]
Human Race Track (Poetry) I will never write again... thanks all for nothing. [500 words] [Crime]
I Thought I Saw You (No?). (Poetry) - [69 words] [Finance]
It Rains Harder Under The Oak Tree (Poetry) A poem that lacks as much as it gains. [19 words] [Motivational]
King For A Day! (Poetry) The best day. [140 words] [History]
Laughing Pig (Poetry) Peek into the central database of thoughts from one man. [112 words] [Mind]
Living Purgatory (Poetry) - [29 words]
Maybe I Did See You. (Poetry) - [89 words] [Thriller]
Myspace (Songs) Myspace pwns. [215 words] [Animal]
Open Coffin (Poetry) Dunno what Im thinking, read and see my mind... [133 words] [Mind]
Pawn Of Z-War (Poetry) - [118 words] [Fantasy]
Personally I Think.... (Poetry) Helpless are these feeling's. [77 words] [Horror]
Phone You, To Hear Your Voice (Poetry) The voice of the one you loved is a siren, you can't help but here their voice as you know everything after will be alright. [142 words] [Relationships]
Placid Dreamer (Poetry) - [115 words]
Rest On The Wind (Poetry) A poem that reads, and loves, it hopes for your eyes to read, and would love it. [74 words] [Mystical]
Review ! A Myth.. (Poetry) A blast at the lack of readers, but writers on this Forum. [108 words] [Motivational]
Same Sky Rhapsody (Poetry) A little jibe at the lack of control in this world.. [111 words] [Mind]
Shadows At Dawn (Poetry) The part of the day where the world wakes up.. [36 words] [Mystical]
Silk Razors (Poetry) I expected this world to be a bit nicer than it is, why are we so nasty sometimes? [114 words] [Romance]
Sleepy Eyes (Non-Fiction) A poem about a man who cant take it in a world full of greed, and has to end it.. I have no psychological link to my brain so this poem is totally non-fiction.:) [77 words] [Mind]
Son Of The Sun (Poetry) - [255 words] [Mystical]
Stairway To No-Where (Poetry) A poem that climbs.....Or..descends!?!? [17 words] [Popular Fiction]
Take Someone Else (Poetry) - [69 words]
Thank You (For Everything That You Do) (Poetry) Ok.. 1 more! [63 words] [Romance]
The Drums Of Jericho (Poetry) - [173 words] [Mystical]
The Forward Thinker (Poetry) Felling a bit ambitious tonight. [166 words]
The Lady In The Forest (Short Stories) She awakens in the forest at 4am. Why? [1,658 words] [Horror]
The Wars Of Belfast Part 1. (Short Stories) A story about a city searching for hope through war, based in the late eighties. Contains some swearing. 15 rating. [1,221 words] [History]
Thinking About Your Leaves (Poetry) - [117 words]
Waving Goodbye (Poetry) A black hole of a poem. [127 words] [Architecture]
Wet Dream (Poetry) - [106 words] [Romance]
Winter's Wisdom (Poetry) Cold and valiant. [90 words] [Fantasy]
|
Carmen, Open That Door!
Sasu
Looking, gazing into space I feel the moon shine down on me,
Wait a minute what was I doing again? I think,
I turn my body over onto my belly, my elbow's support my frame,
Racking through my thought's
Looking at my surrounding's
Hearing the lonley whistle of the tree's around me
I hear the distinct sound of muttering from afar,
But Im alone, Im in the forest late at night,
How did I get here, Am I a Sleepwalker?
The light from the sky calm's me as I turn over again onto my back,
I will not worry, it will come to me,
I am the answer to the question,
The trees brush in one motion, the wind is winning,
The murky sky looms, and the grass where I lay is comfortably moist,
A voice shudder's through me,
A face appears in my vision,
I cannot move, what is this,why can't I move?
I feel my heart racing, my fear embracing, this uninvited soul,
He stares at me, as if Im not there,
I can't speak, I try to move, I cannot scream as if I were metal,
His arm's extend, the shine of the moon sears every ripple in his leather coat.
"Time to bury you" he say's.
Time to bury me, what does he mean, I really cannot scream
I close my eye's and press them together as hard as I can
I open them to see Im not dreaming,
Shit
Shit
SHIT
What's happening, who is he, why has he got full power over me,
The tree's sway once again, a blimp of moonlight shine's through onto his face,
No
I remember you, much pain, such fury, lust and Gold, eager and cold,
He lift's me, I am paralysed, my eye's are awake, Am I dead?
He care's not for my lack of defence, his crime is now.
I remember it all, he took me and buried me, shallow between the tree's.
|
READER'S REVIEWS (4)
DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"Nice work....loved the imagery in this piece..Kepp it up" -- Buxton.
"Liked the detestation of this piece, some nice metaphoric imagery here too...Simple, but really well done." -- ToM Bomb .
"Nice...great imagery Sasu!" -- Mattie.
"Cheers guy's !! Hope to read more of your work (all)." -- Sasu.
TO DELETE UNWANTED REVIEWS CLICK HERE! (SELECT "MANAGE TITLE REVIEWS" ACTION) |
|
Submit Your Review for Carmen, Open That Door!
Required fields are marked with (*).
Your e-mail address will not be displayed.
|
|
Submit Your Rating for Carmen, Open That Door!
|
COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2005 Sasu |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
July 2005 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
2265
|
|
