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Zero And Falling by Diana Venditti - [35 words]
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The Hidden by D G Williford - [27 words]
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Earth Wind And Fire by Diana Venditti - [40 words]
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TITLE (EDIT)
Duh! |
DESCRIPTION
About something that was said.
[20 words] |
AUTHOR
Nesam Pillay |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[November 2004] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (23)
A Rose Bloom (Poetry) Imagery. [48 words]
An Elusive Rose (Poetry) - [88 words]
Baby Play (Poetry) Play time with my Jon! [42 words]
By The Lake (Poetry) Romantic, fantasy for your reading pleasure! [183 words] [Romance]
Classical Feel (Poetry) A short deejaying stint left me with this musical experience. [157 words]
Cold (Poetry) - [160 words] [Relationships]
Daze (Poetry) An experience... [172 words]
Death, Dying (Poetry) An aspect of Life. [154 words]
He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not (Poetry) Romantic Life. [118 words]
In The Lonely Temple (Poetry) Free Poetry - An imagery of a journey to a rendezvous... [492 words] [Romance]
In The Rose Garden (Poetry) Love in a quaint garden? [75 words]
Is He Yearning Too? (Poetry) Romantic. [84 words]
L O V E (Poetry) Experience [45 words]
Life Is Like That (Poetry) About an aspect of life. [141 words]
Missing Him (Poetry) - [32 words] [Relationships]
Orangy Love (Poetry) Imagery. [39 words]
Passion On Canvas (Poetry) Passionate - Erotic - Adults only! [204 words]
Seven Months (Poetry) - [47 words] [Nature]
Simply Malaysia (Poetry) Picturesque Malaysia! [131 words] [Nature]
Soft Touch (Poetry) First Experience. [18 words] [Relationships]
Still Image (Poetry) - [151 words] [Relationships]
Tribute To Ms Diana Venditti (Poetry) A tribute, a note of appreciation. [68 words] [Motivational]
Yellow String (Poetry) A sad love story. [228 words] [Romance]
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Duh!
Nesam Pillay
The words hurt...
Surely the intention was good
But the message 'cuts'
My conviction was torn
That caring suffocates!
That loving needed breath!
Duh!
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"Hi NP, nice, try the word suffocating instead of pressurising,as you said "that loving needed breath" kind regards Diana,ps denotation ."the act of denoting,the actual explicit meaning or object denoted by a word" not sure if it could be changed for better word." -- Diana Venditti, Italy.
"hi Diana! thanks and i have taken your advise (-;" -- Npillay.
"Hi , for me much better, then and this one, I'm not sure, cuts or would cut be better??????kiss to J. kind regards Diana" -- Diana Venditti, Italy.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2004 Nesam Pillay |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
October 2004 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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