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TITLE (EDIT)
Eyes Wide Open |
DESCRIPTION
A song about spouse abuse.
[226 words] |
AUTHOR
Jenine Marie Graschuk |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
A Mom with a passion for poetry...
[April 2000] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
graschuk@telusplanet.net |
Eyes Wide Open
Jenine Marie Graschuk
Eyes Wide Open
At seventeen she thought she knew
A lot more than her parents. Do
I wait, or hesitate? Their date
Was something to anticipate.
He seemed a little rough, at first
Perhaps this wouldn't be the worst
time, but he says he loves her, so,
There she goes,
With her eyes wide open
What is love but how we dream it?
Does it ever feel the same?
Is this one of life's delicious games?
Something she said? He didn't say.
It didn't matter anyway,
This was just another day
She stayed; someday she'll run away.
She had to think of where to go
What to tell them? I don't know?
She can't let the family know
Her tears flow
With her eyes wide open
What is pain, but how we feel it?
Does it ever heal the same?
Is this one of life's malicious games?
She was one they didn't save
Leaving put her in her grave
Secrets that she couldn't share
No one helped her, lying there
As the light began to dim
What was her final thought of him?
Looking blankly at the sky
She died,
With her eyes wide open
What is death, but how we grieve it?
Will they all end the same?
Tragic proof that life's a vicious game.
Something you may think you saw
No, it can't be that at all
Let's pretend we didn't see it
We're mistaken, that can't be it
Mind your own affairs, we say
Not our business anyway
Turn our heads and walk away
Each day
With our eyes wide open
Copyright Jenine Graschuk FEB/2000
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"This song was full of emotion and feeling. I am unsure of the objective of your song, but the lyrics were well-written and thoughtful." -- Julie Fehrenbacher, Elwin, Illinois, United States.
"I enjoyed the flow of the song and the emotion. I was not quite sure where the lyrics were going or what it was truly about but I enjoyed it anyway. It sounded good, flowed good, and was good." -- Jason Wodzien, Normal, Illinois, USA.
"I enjoyed the flow of the song and the emotion. I was not quite sure where the lyrics were going or what it was truly about but I enjoyed it anyway. It sounded good, flowed good, and was good." -- Jason Wodzien, Normal, Illinois, USA.
"Come on you guys. Don't you know a good song when you read it. This was true to the word. I guess you had to be there. Keep it up, Jenine" -- kelly, canada.
"This was well thought out, enjoyed the truth in it and the verses worked well with the emotions reflected. However, this piece should have been posted under Poetry section, as it makes for an excellent poem, but I could not hear a song here." -- Monte, USA.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2000 Jenine Marie Graschuk |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
April 2000 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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