ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Dark imagination, things that slither in the night, the dark side of existence ... Fascinating. I imagine, I write, I dream ... [February 2003]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (55) Descent To Hell (Poetry) This is actually a song I wrote for a novel. [233 words] Do You Feel Me? (Poetry) - [84 words] [Erotic] Don't (Poetry) - [91 words] Edge Of Eternity (Poetry) Loss and redemption. [189 words] Epilogue (Poetry) - [35 words] Eternal Curse (Poetry) Vampires... again. [124 words] [Horror] Evil (Poetry) Another song? What's up with this? [118 words] Fantasy .... Reality (Poetry) Written after a rude awakening. [73 words] [Relationships] Games (Poetry) - [103 words] Happenstance (Poetry) A little silly, perhaps? [66 words] Heaven Bound (Poetry) As did Sylvia, I felt the need to express my feelings on this day of national tragedy, and as she so aptly stated, no reviews necessary. [124 words] I Am Sin (Poetry) More vampires... [116 words] [Horror] Imaginary Lover (Poetry) - [74 words] [Erotic] Immortal Obsession (Poetry) Immortal cravings. [94 words] In The Eventide (Poetry) - [100 words] Insanity Part Un & Insanity Part Deux (Poetry) I believe I've lost it .... [155 words] Interlude (Short Stories) Chance encounters can be dangerous.... [172 words] [Horror] Lycanthrope (Poetry) Poem or short story... you decide... [197 words] [Horror] Mezmerized (Poetry) Oh, the lure of the darkness. [165 words] [Horror] My So-Called Life (Poetry) - [99 words] Not Quite Haiku (Poetry) Just what it seems... [49 words] Nothing Left (Poetry) Love realized. [138 words] [Erotic] Only Words (Poetry) - [61 words] Onslaught Of Love (Poetry) Secret yearnings ... [137 words] Pandora's Bottle (Short Stories) First love, last love... [5,004 words] [Horror] Player (Poetry) When the player tires of the game.... [57 words] [Relationships] Please Now (Poetry) - [49 words] Post Mortem (Poetry) In Memory of Mark Whitney Davis 1960-2001 You left me here alone ... WHY? [68 words] Predator (Poetry) - [84 words] Primal (Poetry) - [26 words] Ravenous (Poetry) - [47 words] [Horror] Requiem (Poetry) -Perhaps a final goodbye [40 words] Reverie (Poetry) - [100 words] Sacrificial Lamb (Poetry) - [94 words] Sisters Of The Heart (Poetry) In Memory of Joey Callihan 1949-1999 [120 words] Soliloquy (Short Stories) A woman seeking love, finds more than she expected. [173 words] [Fable] Soul Of A Dove (Poetry) - [73 words] Spontaneous Combustion (Poetry) A little heat.... [72 words] [Erotic] Steam Heat (Poetry) A little something to warm a winter's day? [20 words] Super Bowl High (Poetry) I've been a Bucs fan from the first inauspicious fumbling in the dark to tonight's awesome Super Bowl win ... This is dedicated to all of us diehard fans! Go Bucs! [109 words] The Bell Tower (Poetry) Unrequited love ... [169 words] [Romance] The Callous Heart (Poetry) Those lying guys... I mean eyes ... [89 words] [Relationships] The Looking Glass (Poetry) - [155 words] The Memory Book (Poetry) A real departure from my usual ... [155 words] The Mists Of Dreams (Poetry) Sensuality. [69 words] [Romance] The Portrait (Short Stories) A painting with a dark secret ... [1,352 words] [Horror] This Man Of Mine (Poetry) - [95 words] Those Eyes (Poetry) Can fantasy become reality? [68 words] [Erotic] Traces Of You (Poetry) - [99 words] Transformation (Poetry) I know, I know, vampires again.... [152 words] Vamp (Poetry) I know, more vampires, I just can't seem to help myself... and who said vampires have to be male? [158 words] [Horror] Vampire (Poetry) - [70 words] [Horror] Where? (Poetry) Lost love [97 words] Whispers On The Wind (Poetry) Something ghostly this way comes... [92 words] [Horror] Winter Wind (Poetry) Alone. [128 words]
Freeky Judith Goff
Scorch me torch me
Do with me as you please
Nail me inhale me
Blast me to my knees
Hold me mold me
Bend me to your will
Scold me control me
Baby shoot to kill
Do me screw me
Make me moan and cry
Burn me don’t spurn me
Sensations amplify
Live me give me
All you have to give
Tear me bare me
Give me something to forgive
Use me abuse me
I beg you baby please
Love me hate me
Share with me your disease
Take me make me
Everything you crave
Stone me disown me
Make me your freeky slave
READER'S REVIEWS (20) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"Judith This makes for some great song lyrics! I can see heavy metal group having fun with this one! Great Job! " -- Monte.
"Monte, Great to see you back reviewing me !!!! Thank you !!! Ya know, this COULD make a pretty good metal song, maybe Metallica? ... hmmm" -- Judith.
"Judith Oh! Yea! Definitely!!! This piece would definitely rock and kick ass!" -- Monte.
"Oh Monte ... you flatter me overmuch, Sir .... thank you (:o)" -- Judith.
"Very interesting!! I like the idea of putting this to heavy metal music!" -- JM.
"Judith; Forgot to mention that all this piece needs is a hook for the Chorus! Perhaps something like "Call me Freaky, Call me Cheeky, Call me anything but Meeky and I'll be your lovin Girl! Or something along those lines! Every good song needs a hook, and a hook on this piece would really rock the house!!!" -- Monte.
"Thanks, JM !!" -- Judith.
"Gee Monte, never really thought of this as a song until you !!! I'll work on a chorus and post it soon!!! Thanx" -- Judith.
"Sounds remarkably like a guys fantasy, ain't imagination grand." -- Just A Guy.
"Metallica? No way. I would think it would be closer to something like Korn or NIN. I could also see Slipknot or maybe PIG doing it. It seems as though you have been influenced by "Six" just a bit. " -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"I'll take that as a compliment, JAG !!!" -- Judith.
"I could see NIN with this, you're right, R Bennett. Do you really think this is like Six, if so, I take that as a compliment. Your work does seem to inspire me to take off in different directions than I normally might." -- Judith.
"VERY VERY IMPRESSIVE. But not surprising from such a talented poet :) And yes this would make great song lyrics. Too good for Korn or NIN ... my band maybe ;) Really great work, hun!" -- Dennis Kanan.
"Dennis ... you leave me without words ... thanks" -- Judith.
"Nothing is too good for NIN. Bite your tongue sir." -- R. Bennett.
"awesome! this is amazing, i wish i had thought of it! :) (kind of reminds me of NIN's "Eraser" ... and yes, nothing is too good for them, mr. kanan!) " -- Rae.
"Rae, thank you, this one seems to have struck a chord(no pun intended)with a lot of people !!!" -- Judith.
"No pun intended my (_|_)" -- R. Bennett .
"Gee, R Bennett ... how creative (:OP" -- Judith.
"Why oh why haven't I read this one sooner!? I loved it Judith, and it does fit the metal song bill perfectly! I would love to be tied up and read that to my lover or vice versa!!!" -- Reagan Rothe, H-Town, TX.
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