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I write this poem at school in history...its a bout a girls life, and no one really cares but she thinks everyone is against her...so yeah...it was rushed a bit but yeah...tell me what you think ;) [77 words]
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Her Depressed Life Danae Bonomini
the wounds are all so clear to her,
she thinks they can not hide,
although no one else notices,
because they are on the inside.
she trys to fight off all the voices,
all the good and the bad,
their messing up her head,
making her depressed and sad.
she sits all by herself at lunch,
she's guessing no one cares,
it mkaes her feel uncomfortable;
all the looks and the stares.
she's turned out so different,
shes's really stressing out,
alot of people didn't notice-
what her life was all about.
so many hidden secrets,
lying underneath her skin,
although-she does not lie,
and she doesn not sin.
they have taken all they've needed,
and now theres nothing left,
she walks all by herself today,
lonely-breath by breath.
when she gets home tonight,
blood will run down her wrists,
even though she has no soul inside,
her feelings still exist.
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