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How It Feels Briony Carvalho
Reaching up to touch the face next to her she pauses
Wondering if it will dissolve if she touches it
Her fingers brush soft skin, a small sigh escapes her
Her soul rushes from her body
Closing her eyes she sees the scene from above
Her and him entwined, holding on against the world
It feels like a small knot at the bottom of her stomach
Working it’s way up to her head, a million tiny bells are chiming
Her soul soars and her feet feel like they’re off the ground
Around her a million shattered hopes and dreams lie
The carcasses of lost promises, broken words
Love, forever, always, eternity…..
Broken and spilling their true rotten cores
Holding her head up she strides through the bodies of yesterdays
Her footprints crushing the past
Brushing back the arms reaching up to drag her into the mist
Facing forward she reaches her hands out to him and leaps
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"This is so moving, you are so lucking to have someone that makes you write like this. Brilliant!" -- Tamsin Butler.
"Yeah, should look first, sometimes there's a cowpat there, sometimes you land on them and crush 'em. The amount of splattered men I've left behind and the amount of poop on my shoes it's lucky I haven't given in!" -- Briony.
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