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I Loved You As A Child Brion' O Neil
jumpin' outta bed, grabbin' the clothes from yesterday
one bite'a pancakes, out the door, with you one more day
hand in hand runnin' down the path to our Summer's scenes
rompin' and pretendin' in the fields of endless dreams
chorus text
I loved you as a child from the first day that we met
it was a moment in my life that I'll never forget
my childhood love turned into the love of my life
I loved you as a child, as I love you for my wife
mud pies for crumpets and red coolaid for tea
the times we shared together, our childhood memory
pretendin' matrimony, usin' coke can pulls for wedding bands
can you remember how nervous I was as we held hands
I was the daddy and you were the mommy when we played house
you rolled up my father's pants, I buttoned your mother's baggy blouse
repeat chorus
walkin' you home every day in high school, carryin' your books
I remember those turnin' heads with their jealous looks
and the look on your face when I stopped to give you my graduation ring
which took us past their notion of a foolish chilhood fling
then that moment at the threshold of the rest of my life
when you said "I do, my love" and became my eternal wife
bridge
I loved you as a child, right from the very start
you were then to me, every other beat of my heart
now that we are one, I share every heartbeat with you
I loved you as a child, now you're my dream come true
repeat chorus
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"hey brion, this is nice. really catchy. i can hear the music of the words. you record it yet? its a pity that 97 others read this yet none of them commented on it. " -- jersey mike, belgium.
"Well Jersey Mike I cheated, this title has been a poem since last May. I just made the poem into a song dragging the review number along with it." -- Brion' O Neil.
"this has always been one of my favourite......." -- Dri.
"Aw, that's sweet, would make a good country song. Love the way you described the way your love grew, your wife's a lucky woman!" -- kavya.
"nah, you didn't cheat - it was yours to start with. what you did was "edit" it, which is what we should all do with our work. please don't make it a country song though - sell it to springsteen!" -- jersey mike, belgium.
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