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I Thought Time Was My Friend Curious
the two of us together
well, i guess it’s just me
fighting with the memory
of happier times together
be easier to forget
but no one’s told me how
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"Cut her loose " -- Brett.
"Dude this is stupid." -- Steve.
"Not stupid...curious, but sad. Hope it isn't real for you." -- mattie.
"brett, u seem to come out of nowhere, last time it was naked men and chemical warfare, i guess it makes sense somewhere, somehow. mattie, sure nice thought but where's the shoulder to cry on huh? booooo. oh i forgot i ignored steve." -- curious.
"Have you ever done time? Would you like to?" -- Brett.
"well only if you count the 3 years at folsum, still remember how upset my girlfriend mike was when i got released. so sad, thanks for caring." -- curious.
"Hi Curious..I read the poem (and comments) with interest. I read your other poem also, and both are clearly (to my mind) emotive pieces that are telling the story of someone (you or someone else ) to come to terms with the abstract concept of love / dying love. I like the way the poem is structured, as you might have guessed, i'm a great fan of anyone who generally challenges the norm in literature. I do it all the time. Makes for some great comments too ! I will resist offering advice as to the above work, not least because it may not relate to you directly, though I kind of get the feeling it does. If it's any consolation, you're not the only one who knows not how to extricate themselves from some of life's jollities. By the way, returning to the comments for this work, I read a few lines of each for a second or third time and began to think that they might make great material for a poem in their own right. Good luck !" -- Colin Baker.
"Now I know you aren't gay so you should stop teasing everyone. as for your poem don't you think that it's really time to get over her." -- Steffe.
"thanks so much for the review colin and unfortunately i guess there's lots of us seeking the way out, some of the comments are indeed interesting - speaking of which, i think steve and steffie are the same - some sort of trans-gender or something perhaps?" -- curious.
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