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Life Judgement Ryuichi Minamino
LIFE
People look at A punk
With his blue spiked hair pierced ears, eye brows and tongue
Baggy shirt with the logo
For some rock band
Obscene lyrics
Parents would never understand
Pants three sizes too big
Hanging off his waist
Sneakers dirty and falling apart
He doesn’t really fit it
He doesn’t really try
‘Cause he doesn’t really
Give a damn
They say when they see him
“They’d better watch that one”
He’s the kind of kid you’d expect to see
Being lead away by the police
“Cause he was caught holding a pound of weed”
People look at a “normal” kid
With his perfect blonde hair
Perfect blue eyes
Fifty dollar shirt
Seventy dollar jeans
Hundred and ten dollar shoes
They say when they see him
'Now that’s a…Good boy”
'Cause he make the grades
'Cause he has good parents
Showing off the perfect life
He might be a doctor when he grows up
But he’s gonna amount to something big
When in reality cold unforgiving reality
He’s gonna end up
Teenage father
Drug addict
High School drop out
Killed in a car accident
You know why?
‘Cause he fit in
‘Cause he tried
'Cause he cared what others thought of him
He was willing to go
As far as they wanted
When he finally did
Look what it got him
A body bag
And a funeral service
Three years later
That punk with the Spiked hair
Is finishing his second year of collage
Now he making the grades
He’s got good friends
And parents that care
He’s got the prefect life
Guess What?
He might be a doctor
But he’s gonna amount to something big.
*V2* Think about it…
*V3* How true is this…
*V1* There’s only one word to describe it…
*Pause and sudden stop in music*
*Everyone* LIFE!
THE END
READER'S REVIEWS (3) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"hey Ryuichi like what your trying to get across here I don't know about the part of reaveling a gun ,unless your saying they suspect he has a gun and I'm just a bit confused if not it makes the apperance issue you raise look bad for the kid ,anyhow nice write" -- fh, canada.
"Here how do you like it now? Is it better or what? Plz e-mail me your comments." -- Ryuichi.
"I think it is easier to read but the melody for this will be it 's strenghth I think ,have a great evening" -- fh, canada.
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