ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am a 15 year old writer from Indianapolis, Indiana. I write poems, books, and songs. But my greatest passion is for film. My intrests range from Harry Potter, to Tarantino, to Billy Joel. I hope every one enjoys my work! [February 2005]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (14) As The Stars Streak By (Poetry) I A poem that is in my new book "BPD: Danger Rising". I figured I would post it by itself to see what people thought of it. Enjoy! [64 words] [Spiritual] Bpd: Danger Rising-Part 1 (Novels) This is the fifth book in the series that used to go by the name of "Smith & Ronalds". I changed it becuase other characters are playing a bigger role in the story than before. The story picks up righ... [6,876 words] Depth (Poetry) A poem about trying to find out who you are and what you place in the world is, an eternal struggle that we all face. [145 words] On And Offf (Poetry) A poem about confusion and distress, and the struggle to overcome it. [180 words] Significance-First Draft (Screenplays) The first draft of my script. It is the simple story of a teenage girl on a soccer team. May seem boring, but my sole mission in my sripts are to make stories that are almost completetley devoid of cl... [9,272 words] [Drama] Smith & Ronalds: A Time Of Change (Novels) The third entry in the Smith & Ronalds series. It focuses on the 1996 presidental election. Hector, Trev, Dave, Carrie, and Cedric all have to cope with the dargerous side-effects of politics. [5,620 words] [Drama] Smith & Ronalds: The Murder Of The Prisoners (Novels) The first story in my series. It is the story of two detectives who team with a Hematologist to stop a mysterious vigilante on the lose in Indiana. [9,467 words] [Crime] Smith & Ronalds: The Shawdow In The Alley (Novels) My second re-post. It is the second volume in my sereie. It ounce again takes place at S3 of the Bloomington Police Department. Dave and Trev ounce again team with Dr. Hector Stone to track down a kil... [5,969 words] [Crime] Smith & Ronalds-Origins & Conclusions (Novels) The fourth volume in my sereis, and the last one to go by 'Smith & Ronalds'. The story is as follows: Detectives Trevor E. Smith and David Ronalds team ounce again with Carrie B. Moss and Cedric Madis... [10,812 words] [Drama] The Immortal Seed (Poetry) A poem about something that we all have within us, and something that aides us more then anything else. [149 words] The Round Dams (Poetry) A poem about concealed sadness and the reluctance to let it free. [171 words] Thirst (Poetry) "Why?": The universal question we all ask. When we ask that, we are often in need of something, something that is beyond our grasps. This poem is about that need we all feel, even if what that is is f... [90 words] Where Have The Times Gone? (Poetry) A poem about the loss of something that was always uncertain. It is about what we sometime want to lose, but should never be lost: friendship. [128 words] Winter To Spring (Poetry) A poem about hope, and the eduring power of the human spirit. [161 words]
Light And Dark Patrick Collins
Light and dark: so separate, so far.
Separated by a natural steel bar.
But one thing can make them merge,
One thing can make that bar converge.
The reel rolls, the lights go dark,
And in a few hours, this art will leave its mark.
The dust drifts in the path of the light,
And the numbers appear; dark and bright.
The slow ticks and tocks, the hums and flashes,
They show happiness and sadness, manners and crassness.
I see eyes and I see ears,
I see laughter and I see tears.
I see emotions that span a million years.
I see the birth of democracy,
I see love and intimacy.
The light brightens the vast field,
And now our emotions are now locked and sealed.
I see a character small, I see him big,
I see his life being hung on a rusting metal rig.
I see him bloom, I see him grow,
I see a life in this picture show.
The lights turn on, the crowd stands and leaves,
Back to their cars that are parked,
But they will never forget what they saw, in that light and dark.
READER'S REVIEWS (2) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"Loved it, some rhyming sounded forced rather than a natural flow of ideas, but still a great poem, loved the theme and natural tone. Great work" -- Rebecca.
"Wow, very interesting... i can relate for i am also a lover of cinema. The poem had a really solid flow til i hit this stanza: "The lights turn on, the crowd stands and leaves, Back to their cars that are parked..." The second like kinda chopped things up. Other than that great work." -- ryan severud.
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