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It's about a girl I met this summer. I like her ways and her fun personality. However, I don't know anymore. As I wrote this poem I started to question why. [455 words]
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[118 words] Silently At Your Side (Poetry) - [223 words] Smiling Cross The Walk (Poetry) Please write feedback. [188 words] Song In My Head (Poetry) It's a poem about the journey I've had to go through you to experience love. [253 words] Stay With Me (I Feel Alone) (Poetry) - [167 words] Stranded In Back Of My Mind (Poetry) - [188 words] Stranded Like A Picture Frame (Poetry) - [316 words] Summer Crush (Poetry) It's about seeing someone for the last time and explaining why I confessed my feelings for her. [213 words] Teenaged Love (Poetry) - [206 words] The End Of Liz (Poetry) It's a poem about a girl that I should have ran away from the first second I met her. [500 words] The Fool (Poetry) This a poem about a person who is in love with someone who chooses to ignore them and play with their feelings [259 words] The Job Of An Angel (Poetry) - [101 words] The Wings Of An Angel (Poetry) - [149 words] The World Is Deceiving (Poetry) IT's just a poem I wrote while listening to a song. [185 words] The World Joys Our Love (Poetry) - [218 words] The World Through Your Head (Poetry) Late night random thoughts. [179 words] Then Comes A Time (Poetry) This a poem about a resent relationship. [165 words] This Feeling Of Hope (Poetry) It's just a poem about waking up and realizing the person next to you is simply perfect [202 words] Time Lies (Poetry) - [128 words] Time With Me (Poetry) Just a transient thought. [42 words] Tu Baile Gitano. (Poetry) I haven't written something in spanish in a long time. So I figured might as well. It's about memories of a better day. When that person you were with, made it worth going another day. [201 words] Tu Seduccion Core Como El Rio (Poetry) It's about a girl I have a weird relationship with. It's in spanish cause it turns her on. LoL [163 words] Un Dia En La Playa (Poetry) It's a poem on what I think love should feel like. Es un poema describiendo lo que yo pienso que es amor. 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[166 words] Winter Haze (Poetry) About going to Norway [248 words] [Romance] Wonder Why (Poetry) - [130 words] You Cheat (Poetry) - [198 words] [Relationships]
Liz Roberto J Moreno
As I write this letter,
To in some way make things better,
I wonder if you care,
Though I know you don’t really see me,
In the light I try to see you,
From the moment I met you,
I knew of this affection,
And I wish you only knew,
The way it made me show,
I acted all shy and in control,
When All I wanted to do was run,
You once told me,
If a girl really liked me,
I’d know,
But by the signs that the radar is not receiving I should be lost,
In some way your spark caught my eye,
You’re goofy in a silly way,
That makes me want to play pranks, point the finger and laugh,
The way your smile can make a day shine in 500 different ways,
It’s like a rush,
And I can’t explain it,
Your lips are like sugar to a swarm of bees,
Though tempting too dangerous to kiss,
However, as I write this I realize,
I fancy myself clever,
But I’m a hopeless romantic,
Blinded by my own ambition I realize,
That maybe I’m just blowing things out of proportion,
I’m just another nice guy,
One of the many who happens to feel like February morning at your side,
Let’s be honest,
After our time is done,
We won’t even recognize each other in the halls,
And with in time we’ll become strangers,
We’ll even stand side to side without saying “Hi” or “Good-Bye.”
As I write this letter,
To in some way make things better,
I wonder if you care,
I have to confess,
Every time I look at you I can’t help it,
My imagination runs the same scenario,
Only if I could run up and kiss you,
For that split minute have enough courage to caress your lips with mine and run my fingers through your wavy blonde hair,
Your lips are like sugar to a swarm of bees,
Though tempting too dangerous to kiss,
You sit quiet,
Knowing that if you wanted to the world could revolve around you,
You once told me,
If a girl really liked me,
I’d know.
In some way your spark caught my eye,
You’re childish in a silly way,
That makes me want to play pranks, point the finger and laugh,
The way a block of melted cheese sounded tempting,
The way your smile can make a day shine in 500 different ways,
It’s like a rush,
And I can’t explain it,
However, as I write this I realize,
I fancy myself clever,
But I’m a hopeless romantic,
and poems can be lame,
Blinded by my own ambition I realize,
That maybe I’m just blowing things out of proportion,
I’m just another nice guy,
One of the many who happens to feel like February morning at your side,
You won’t even recognize me in halls,
And with in time we’ll become strangers,
We’ll even stand side to side without saying “Hi” or “Good-Bye.”
Let’s be honest,
you never seemed interested in calling my name,
Or at least you did but just left me in the rain.
READER'S REVIEWS (4) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"I liked this one. I take it you had a crush on the girl. The way you refer to her and the way you like her; however, she doesn't respond, or if she does she leave you out to dry. I like the fact that it seems like a confession but you are in doubt of your feelings for her. " -- Jacklyn.
"Nice poem. It paints an uncertainty phase. It seems like you like but her interest in not there. If it is she might lead on and them regrets it. It is true that some women do view poems as lame & when you do say too much the element of conquest is gone." -- John D..
"Look at it this way: at least Liz helped you further your writing career" -- Steven.
"LoL Steven, the thing is that I like her. I really do. Then again, "we love because it's the only true adventure."" -- Rob, Miami , Fl, USA.
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