DESCRIPTION
I wrote it and apparently it's good. Lots of thanks to Gordon for helping me with the ideas. Be warned there is a slight bit of swearing. [197 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I love to read and learning new languages. My favorite types of music are metal/punk and rock. [September 2005]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (6) Ex's Have No Rights (Songs) It's a song I wrote for my band, see it when it's recoreded on www.myspace.com/deadontheoutsiderock [144 words] Girl Downstairs (Short Stories) A girl meets another girl who steals the love of her life. [707 words] Love You Forever (Short Stories) Its something thats going to happen to someone who used to be my best friend. [327 words] Memories Past (Short Stories) It's pretty self expanitery [453 words] Stupid Teenagers (Poetry) - [41 words] The Last Sunset (Short Stories) It's the story of a girl driven crazy by taunting and heartbreak. [679 words] [Thriller]
Na Alice W-M
There’s a question praying on my mind,
I’m wondering if you’ll be mine,
I talk but do you hear me?
I know that you don’t fear me,
True friendship is compromising,
Tomorrow brings new things,
Enjoy it while it lasts,
Live life cause it goes fast.
I hope you appreciate what I’m doing for you,
You chew me up and spit me out and make me feel so blue,
You let me pay your way,
I’d let you die in a day,
If you don’t let your emotions show,
They’ll just grow and grow,
You keep them bottled up,
Well that bottle’s about to pop.
It’s all so fucked up,
No one will shut up,
How can you survive?
When your eyes are so dry?
I miss you so much,
I might just give up.
I’ll be fine in the end,
My broken memories will mend,
Darling can’t you see?
We’re in too deep,
Floating away from here,
To somewhere where skies are clear,
And where the birds sing soft, sweet melodies,
And where there are no apologies.
It’s all so fucked up,
No one will shut up,
How can you survive?
When your eyes are so dry?
I miss you so much,
I might just give up.
It’s all so fucked up,
No one will shut up,
How can you survive?
When your eyes are so dry?
I miss you so much,
I might just give up.
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"i liked it... it makes sence, and my friend is going through something almost exactly like this... yes keep on writing it's good... i don't mind the swearing it goes good with what you wrote.. well, peace out" -- Carla Thomson.
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