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TITLE (EDIT) Right Through Me
DESCRIPTION - [161 words]
AUTHOR Jasmine P Batey
ABOUT THE AUTHOR Hi! My name is Jasmine Batey, I was born in '94, so at the moment I'm 16, I enjoy writing poetry, lyrics and stories, I love listening to music, mainly rock and all of it's sub - genres, and i REALLY LOVE getting comments on story mania! so please leave feedback and I will update regularly! enjoy reading! [January 2011]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (31) Because You (Songs) um a song about love, when the person doesn't know that you like them [143 words] Before The Hero (Poetry) i don't know where to go with it after this [36 words] Don't Let Me Drown (Poetry) - [43 words] Ever Again. (Poetry) um.... i was angry... and yes -it is about murder. [78 words] Every One Leaves (Poetry) just a poem about how i feel sometimes. [32 words] Every Things Alright (Poetry) - [110 words] God, If You're Up There... (Poetry) My prayer [39 words] Heaven... (Poetry) Another little poem about BOTHE suicide AND love. [140 words] I Love You Baby (Poetry) A small love poem [107 words] I Want You To See Me (Poetry) - [102 words] Is It Worth Being Alone? (Poetry) Again, a sneak peak into my Life [89 words] Jack The Ripper (Poetry) a small jokey poem, written for fun as a tongue-in-cheek thing. as the title says, It's about Jack the Ripper. [77 words] Just Open My Eyes (Poetry) - [135 words] Love Is A Despair (Poetry) - [92 words] My Release (Poetry) a small poem about cutting (as you probably guessed) I know some one cutting and thats what inspired it. [75 words] Nothings Wrong (Poetry) an inside view of me [13 words] Numb (Poetry) To a certain someone, you really hurt me. [43 words] One Of These Days (Poetry) I was dared to write a poem about a smile, I doubt that this is what she had in mind, but it IS a poem about a smile, so here is a poem, and i have 'Frankie' to thank for it. So thank you Frankie. [86 words] Pain. Betrayal. Hurt. Anger.... (Poetry) just a poem about how i feel sometimes... [29 words] Saving Grace (Songs) Love again -- funny, my songs are about love and my poetry death.... hmmmm [84 words] Take You Back Again (Poetry) - [119 words] The Cloud (Poetry) again, a challenge I accepted from Frankie, the beginning is a bit bodgy, (the first stanza) anyway, please leave advice and comments, and I hope you like! [121 words] The Devil Laughs (Poetry) - [85 words] The Nightmares (Why) (Poetry) - [61 words] The Only Casualty (Poetry) a small poem I wrote this morning -- haven't completed one about a smile yet but working on it!! -- It's not one of my best, it was a rush job so any feedback is not only welcome, but wanted. [59 words] The Rose - By Jasmine Batey (Poetry) A story of love, a rose, and in a way, a story about love. [62 words] The Screaming, The Anger, The Hurt And The Pain (Poetry) hope you enjoy and please comment -- not one of my best [108 words] To My Sister (Poetry) basically a letter to my sister that im not brave enoug to deliver to her myself. [200 words] When Summer Comes Again (Poetry) a small HAPPY poem :) [97 words] Why The Gun? (Poetry) Just a small poem [95 words] You Are The Beat (Poetry) This could also be transformed into a song...? About ome one famous -- see if you can guess who =P [84 words]
Right Through Me Jasmine P Batey Why is it so hard to belong? And why is it so easy to lie? what is it about that song, that reminds me of your smile? Why is the sky so blue? and why is the night always dark? I simply wish I knew, Because I don't know how you don't know and I cant see how you cant see right through me why is it one look from you can make my heart beat fast is it fairy tale or true? because i know it feels right why cant you see the obvious? and why cant you open your eyes, look whats laid out before us; its fate, its love, its our life I don't know how you don't know and I cant see how you cant see right through me Why is it so hard to believe how can this be a lie? it felt like forever it was forever for me I couldn't see what you could see didn't you feel the same as me? You don't know how I didn't know it was a simple fantasy how did you see right through me? how could you see right through me?
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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE January 2011	NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED 1399