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School Girl Fantasy Fred Hardy
I see her everyday,walking past the library
she never stops and she never looks this way
there's nothing that this girl needs to learn
all the doors they'll open up at every turn
she's like ,one of those girls you would find
on the cover of a mag or advertisement sign
from her adolescence to her arrogance
she just keeps it moving on
this girl keeps it moving on
ch
and there she goes ,yeah there she goes
there she goes again,
I'm telling all my friend
she's everything and everything
she's everything I dream,
she ain't no make believe
she's my school girl fantasy
she's my school girl fantasy
she ain't no make believe
she's my school girl fantasy
v2
I see her everyday, slowly walking away
you can tell,she knows she's got it made
the way she teases me without a word
just her beautiful teenage curves
her high school colors above her knee's
her see through shirt revealing herself to me
with her adolescence and her arrogance
she just keeps it moving on
this girl keeps it moving on
ch
and there she goes ,yeah there she goes
there she goes again
I'm telling all my friends
she's everything,and everything
she's everything I dream
she ain't no make believe
she is my school girl fantasy
she's my school girl fantasy
she ain't no make believe
she's my school girl fantasy
bridge
someday she's going to be someone
and I'll be there to say
I remember when, she was
my school girl fantasy
and there she goes yeah there she goes
there she goes again
I'm telling all my friends
she everything and everything
she's everything I dream
she ain't no make believe
she is my school girl fantasy
she's my school girl fantasy
she ain't no make beliveve
she's my school girl fantasy
tag
I see her everyday
my school girl ,fantasy
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"Is there anything in this life sexier than a hot schoolgirl? I think not! Cool poem!" -- thePratmeister.
"thanks for checking this out Pratmeister ,I 'd have to agree with you ,it must be that uniform" -- fh, canada.
"this is directed to the comments not the song, probably showing my age but it seems a pretty perverted way to view a young girl. " -- curious.
"What, are you a prude or a faggot or something? There is no other way to view young girls!" -- Thepratmeister.
"well I guess your right,I'm going to hell. with about 95% of every other guy who would take notice of the girl I described in this song,but in all reality I think I would be more worried about the less then 5% who wouldn't say it.at least to themselves" -- fh, canada.
"Well said that man!" -- thePratmeister`.
"Well...my 2 cents worth. With things the way they are in the world...it is not encouraging to know that adult men would have such a view as this. Check the sight of missing and exploited children it is full of beautiful teenage girls..." -- mattie.
"hey Mattie,this seems to have stirred up some contraversy, I think there is a lot of confusion in what I'm saying.the girl in the song is seventeen her last year of high school.she is not an average teenager and she would not be considered a child . I really think that it would be unlikely that a guy wouldn't take notice of her.and the ones that say they wouldn't notice her are either lying or well whatever I can't see how this is seen as abnormal behavior ,how old are the models in these magazines that blitz the supermarkets or the girls in music industry who have been scouted on their looks since they were very young.I'm not trying to condon such activities but what is ,is what is and thats fact since the dawn of time.have a good evening" -- fh, canada.
"Oh, the moralistic handwringing! I'm gonna get my tissues out in a minute. A cute girl is a cute girl. People who try and deny this make me wanna vomit." -- thePratmeister.
"fh...the song is really good. Songs have been written from that perspective for years...my comment stems from the reviews already posted, and the idea I suppose. Being the mom of 2 beautiful teenage daughters I don't like the idea of them being seen that way...it's a parent thing I guess. " -- mattie.
"hey Mattie I can certainly respect your point of view ,to be honest I couldn't deal with it . I've spent alot of time in the dressing room playing Hockey,and guys are ,well you can figure it out.I can only imagine the stress of two teenage daughters ,have a good evening." -- fh, canada.
"Fred, nice song bro. The lyrics are so true. But the girl you are describing, sounds like abit of a slut to me. And Mattie, the longer you ignore the fact that your girls will soon be pulling in bars in 5 years, the more it will hurt to let them go. -Love You Bye." -- Jak Balshaw, UK.
"thanks Jax for looking at this ,you mabybe right but the real truth is I see girls like this everday ,beyond the watchful eyes of the parents and I guess it's society that has them appearing this way .I just put it down in a lyric .thanks again for checking it out " -- fh, canada.
"fred, i must say. you get a LOT of reviews. i only get like 1 or 2 a song. great song by the way. i'm just at school in my typing class." -- chad naquin.
"thanks Chad ,this got alot of review cause it hit a nerve ,I didn't intend it to, just wanted to write something upbeat .so in the end not many of them really had anything to do with the quality of writing .thanks for your time and comments" -- fh.
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