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TITLE (EDIT)
Sea |
DESCRIPTION
My first poem, wrote it when I was 15. Am pretty embarassed abt the amateur style.
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TITLE KEYWORD
Nature |
AUTHOR
Avis |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[August 2006] |
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God? (Poetry) - [110 words] [Spiritual]
I Met Him For The Last Time (Short Stories) Narrative monologue. I think the title speaks for itself. [1,096 words] [Relationships]
Maybe... (Poetry) A Bold, Brave poem which reveals it all and yet coyly admits nothing. [354 words] [Romance]
Medical-Shedical (Short Stories) Narration of annual general medical exam. [1,548 words] [Humor]
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On Abortion (Poetry) My guttural reaction when I watched a documentary on abortion in school. [113 words] [Crime]
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The Wedding Reception (Short Stories) - [1,893 words] [Humor]
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Sea
Avis
The Sea
The sea breeze whispers songs in my ear
The velvet sands carpet my bare feet below
My heart feels light, as light as the waves
Foaming and frothing with rhythmic beats
The sea is so calm, calm is my mind
Happy and peaceful and so sublime
Living so near so close to the sea,
has taught me to appreciate its beauty so free
The sea and its treasures so rare and so safe
Just like a human mind, a mystery to trace
The sea fascinates me with a radiance of its colours
Spilled out in its waters, pinks and lavenders
The sea and its beauty, brilliant aquamarine
Changes to crimson watching the sun setting scene
The splendor and grandeur of the sea enchant me
All its hidden secrets challenge and taunt me
And when in death I’d like to sleep in one of the coral islands
No one to know me, no one to see me
Save the sea’s warm embraces
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"Amateur yes... but shows that the writer has potential. You've come a long way. Imaginative and free. " -- Suz, Sharjah, UAE.
"i think you're selling yourself short. this is a terrific first effort. if you hadn't mentioned that i certainly wouldn't have known." -- just a guy.
"Thanks for your reviews Avis, I really appreciate it. Like yo were when you wrote this poem, I am a young amateur writer and this is great. It has beautiful description and is of a proffesional standard! GREAT!!!" -- Jack Roland Butter.
"Good peom as a first timer!" -- Jitendra Pande.
"I totally agree with the "other guy"." -- Stratovarius, India.
"Great work...For a first Poem, the Sea is fantastic... i like the way u have used colour to make the sea not just the blue that is usually expected but a spectrum of colors that creates colorful images in the minds of the readers. Simple language used by u is also very enjoyable and does keep the reader at ease." -- Sharon.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2004 Avis |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
March 2004 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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