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Shit On Me Jannah Akira
SHIT ON ME
I miss the mushroom soup
I miss the taste of hope
It’s like everything I know
Turn out to be something unknown
You used to be by my side
You used to give me something to sleep to
You used to call me late at night
I used to hear from you everyday
When I’m mad and got no mood
You said I treated you like a mice
And that I used to be so nice
But now, you’re the one who turn your back
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Everyone is having fun
I’m always on the run
With no point of direction
And no sign of confidence
I’m half insane now
I need to see a physcologist
I need to stop being a bitch
I’m sorry if I had to leave you
I might need some time alone now
But what’s wrong with you now
You don’t need me anymore
I still remember how you used to be
Why ignore me when you’ve got the best of me
Is it because I don’t wanna date you
Or because you think I didn’t like you
How come I be so predictable
If you ask, I’ll tell the truth
*
Everyone is having love
But I’m waiting for sky above
To fall on me so I can’t reach out
To stop my life so I’ll just give up
I’m damn depressed now
Everything in my life
Couldn’t help me survive
Break me out, take me out of here
Don’t tell me it’s okay with me
He don’t even like me
I’m just nobody
Stop acting infront of me
Fuck off, I hate this shit
Always shit on me
Everyone is shit on me
Stop this shit on me
Repeat +
Repeat *
I’ll kill myself now
I’m leaving, I’m leaving
Don’t wanna try anymore
I’m giving up
I’m giving up my life
I’m giving up
You’re just a shit on me
READER'S REVIEWS (8) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"Hmmm disturbing, but quite entertaining none-the-less. Well done." -- La Longue Carabine.
"Glad you like it! I'm shouting when i sing it" -- Akira NJ.
"content rambles and if it is a lyric it does'nt rhyme and some bad choice of words...you don't need the vulgarities... but you will learn." -- Brian O Neil.
"thanks for your review on A LETTER TO DADDY. That would be nice that so much hurt would turn into a song. Keep up your good work, Akira." -- Dri.
"Thanks Dri. I would just turn my angriness and hate into a song and Brian, well, I had my rhymes for this song but it's kinda hard to play the guitar and make it sounds perfect" -- Akira NJ.
"i agree some of the words i would change but i liked the raw emotion and anger - i can tell it was straight from your head to the page ...(or screen..) nicely done!" -- mikaela.
"I like this poem because it expresses the roaring fire in you. It tells me that you're full of rage and passion.I would like you to take out all of your rage on me as we lay naked in bed.I promise I won't shit on you,unless you want me to but that may be a little to freaky for me.Until we meet again my little Asian sex kitten." -- someone who desires you.
"This song is wild. How did you think of these lyrics?" -- Mitch.
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