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TITLE (EDIT)
Tiny Dreams |
DESCRIPTION
As with the rest.. five minutes of brain splurge! - please please review some of my stuff - even if you think it's utter bobbins! - just amended it to have less 'she's' in it, thanks KM for the advise.
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AUTHOR
Briony Carvalho |
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ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
just me
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Tiny Dreams
Briony Carvalho
She lies on her bed with her dreams resting at her feet
Picking them up one by one, shaking them, watching the snow settle
She places one on the bedside table
The lamp light shatters into a hundred pieces, dances round the ceiling
The snow settles and the tiny dream looks peaceful
The next day she looks at the beautiful scene in the globe
Dirty footprints stomped all over the white gleaming snow
A wolf hiding in the shadows
The water is running from the globe, trickling onto the floor
The tiny heart in the centre shrunken a little bit more
She bends down and picks up a smaller glistening globe
Dropping the tiny heart into it and watching it swirl up the snow
She places it in the palm of her hand
Brushing the shattered dream into the drawer and locking it
Wiping the water from the table she places the tiny globe onto the space
And looks out into the night
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"What beatiful pome." -- Jeanette H.
"Awesome I love the style and the thought put into this piece,GREAT JOB!!!" -- Brian L.
"This is beautiful. I think you should get rid of some of the "she"'s though...there are too many. " -- km.
"I agree with you KM - I'll work on it a bit and re-submit it with less she's! - thank you all for the comments though" -- Briony.
"I agree with KM it had too many she's before, It works better now. What was your influence??" -- T B, Maidenhead, Berks.
"Hi T B, just the usual life problems everyone has when you start off life wanting the moon on a stick and ending up realising that you have to settle for a piece of cheese!" -- Briony.
"I loved it! I don't know about your comment regarding settling for a little piece of cheese though...darn! a great big hunk of it is a minimal expectation don't you think? Anyway very well written, I look forward to reading your other posts. Welcome!" -- mattie.
"I would love a HUUUGGGGEEE chunk of cheese but so far I've only got a cracker sized bit - thank you for your comments everyone... it's really nice to know that you like my stuff!" -- Briony.
"I know how you feel, I would love a big bit of cheese too." -- Tamsin.
"All this cheese talk is making me hungry, Nice piece, Briony" -- kwilt.
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© 2005 Briony Carvalho |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
November 2005 |
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