ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Scars were her poison always ugly in day ripped her own heart out as if to say: sing not to me I care not at all I am who I'll be or I'll be not at all [May 2006]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (66) A World With You (Poetry) - [49 words] After Dark (Poetry) I used to really like the nighttime... [74 words] As Bad As I Make It (Poetry) - [51 words] Bad Answers (Poetry) It's ok on the surface. [60 words] Beauty Of Horror (Poetry) - [87 words] Begging Forgiveness (Poetry) - [60 words] Broken Tears (Songs) Had a weird afternoon... inspired a song... I hope this one is less confusing to everyone than the last one I posted! [279 words] Canyon (Poetry) More adventures in cutting. [18 words] Caress (Poetry) Took excerpts from In Watermelon Sugar by Richard Brautigan and The Knife by Richard Selzer and made them into a poem. really focused on style in this one... [76 words] Comfort (Poetry) - [120 words] Coming Together (Poetry) For now I am calling it a work in progress, but would appreciate feedback on whether it sounds incomplete or not. [109 words] Daybreak (Poetry) - [75 words] Devil Screams (Songs) I don't like it. maybe you will. or maybe i'll just delete it tomorrow. [130 words] Doomed To Be Free And Fanciful (Poetry) - [75 words] For Leah (Poetry) Because I now know why one isn't sainted until after death. [61 words] Forcing Eternity (Poetry) I'm so impatient. [93 words] Getting Ahead (Songs) Well, if you can't get ahead in life, you choose the next best thing, perhaps... [206 words] Going Down (Poetry) - [224 words] Hand-In-Hand (Poetry) - [53 words] I Hate Making Titles 2 (Songs) Song. [128 words] Identity (Poetry) - [134 words] In Time (Poetry) A real enough place. [99 words] Lawrence (Poetry) The [brief] story of a man. [95 words] Like A Hot Knife Through Butter (Short Stories) - [281 words] Like Waking (Poetry) - [86 words] Likely (Poetry) - [62 words] Losing (Poetry) - [103 words] Mirror Games (Poetry) - [135 words] My Lamb (Songs) Not sure what it is... I call it a song only because I sang it while I wrote it... but it could quite possibly be a poem, too. The way it's sung, it's sweet and smooth when it starts, then gets faster... [71 words] My Last Night With Her (Short Stories) A quick story. [448 words] My Soul Is A Hole (Poetry) - [92 words] Needless (Poetry) - [60 words] Never Let Me Go (Songs) - [311 words] Nothing But Touch (Short Stories) Haven't had inspiration lately, so I picked ten random words and wrote around them. [239 words] Ode To Losing Late Nights (Poetry) Stupid ramblings about losing stuff ... like the love of your life ... [90 words] Once I Hit The Ground (Poetry) - [99 words] Passion's Ruins (Poetry) - [56 words] People (Poetry) A little mindlessness. [41 words] Please Every Night (Poetry) Don't wake me up. [72 words] Raven (Poetry) - [83 words] Released (Poetry) - [37 words] Ringing Of War (Songs) Just a song... [204 words] Rodents And Reptiles (Poetry) - [68 words] Schism (Songs) I posted this before, but it disappeared somehow... it's a song kind of like "not my god" which I wrote a while ago.. I suppose you could call it part 2. [269 words] Silent Stalker (Poetry) - [59 words] Sisters (Poetry) - [80 words] Slave (Poetry) You decide who/what it's about... [58 words] Smooth White Plastic (Poetry) - [113 words] So Bold A Man (Poetry) Inspired by one of the many amazing paintings by Zdislaw Beksinski who just recently passed away. (http://www.novumgallery.pl/beksinski/bex4.html) [72 words] Soft (Poetry) - [115 words] Someone Without You (Poetry) I despise trying to do this. [84 words] Summer Song (Poetry) It comes and goes on its own accord... [120 words] Take Me Home (Songs) I dunno about this one... it sounded good when I sang it, but the chorus might be too long, making it too repetitive... and besides that, it might just suck. tell me what you think. [179 words] Taking Control Of What Is Mine (Poetry) - [32 words] That Bed (Poetry) Was at my parents' place this weekend and it felt so weird... [24 words] The Best Of Me (Poetry) - [202 words] The Novel China Doll (Poetry) Seen too many things like it. [52 words] The Wild Flee (Short Stories) An ode to imaginary friends. [471 words] The Worst Thing (Poetry) - [83 words] Think Of Me (Poetry) I cry so often over him lately... [169 words] This Heart (Poetry) - [60 words] Tool Of The Gods (Poetry) - [104 words] Twisted Figures (Short Stories) Just wrote it down as it came to mind.. no sense or anything :) [294 words] Ultimately At Your Service (Poetry) - [82 words] Unrest (Poetry) Another short one. [28 words] Wschod Slonca Krwawy (Poetry) - [95 words]
To Warm Me Rae
he was so warm. he's always warm.
his mouth...
always soft and warm and his lips
soft and wet.
the way he kisses to make it better, to make everything better.
no matter where we are.
no matter how long i've walked, how long i've cried,
how cold i am...
and he has me sit in his lap and just kiss him.
and i feel like something again.
i don't feel so small,
insignificant.
I feel his mouth and the way it loves mine
no matter what's going on.
the way he wouldn't let go or let me off his lap.
the promises...
the promises whispered in my ear.
he would marry me
he will marry me.
kiss him.
he will never let me go.
kiss.
he swears.
he will marry me.
i can still feel his breath against my cold cheek and in my cold ear.
hot breath from his warm, soft mouth.
and if i don't live to kiss him again,
it will have been an awfully miserable death.
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"Okay! That was passionate! I could feel what she was feeling in the lines you wrote. I didn't quite like the beat of the poem but it flowed well. There is such turmoil in this poem and I think poem should capture desire, turmoil and pain...wonder ...etc. Rae, I enjoyed this alot." -- e. rocco caldwell.
"nice to see you full of hope rae, nice job and good luck" -- Just A Guy.
"simple and passionate. Beautiful! Dri Cook" -- dri cook, sao paulo, sp, brasil.
"Rae...omg! This is beautiful...I really love the repeating of the words, the kiss and the lips...its so warm and sensual. Great job!" -- km.
"Is sweet and filled with warmth...hope it's real and lasting for you :)" -- mattie.
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