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TITLE (EDIT)
Why Can't I Have You |
DESCRIPTION
Its a poem about a girl who really likes this guy but the guy doesnt really care about her so she put her life to an end at the same moment that the phone rang and it was the guy she liked... and no this didnt happen to me.
[113 words] |
AUTHOR
Karina Lizet Perez |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[May 2004] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
mkbc_girl_2000@hotmail.com |
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Back To Ashes (Poetry) - [130 words]
Bad Dreams (Songs) Sumthing saying what I feel toward a person who just plays games... [89 words]
Between Death And Life (Songs) This one is about how people should think before they commit suicide cause they think its all over but all thehy did was hurt everyone around them... [264 words]
Creative Forms Of Poetry (Poetry) This is an assignment for my english class, It's a variaty of different poems written in different forms. Even if they are short, they have good meanings behind them. [155 words]
Daddy Come Back (Poetry) A poem dedicated to my dad who I havent seen since I was like 7 years old. [96 words]
Don't Lie (Songs) This is a song I just wrote for fun so if you dont really like this one it's okay... I don't like it that much either but its okay. [137 words]
Fallen Rose (Songs) Who I am is represented by a rose. [168 words]
How It Is To Be Me (Poetry) A poem on how I feel through out my life. [141 words]
I Cannot Believe (Songs) Its just a great rock song lol telling about how people lose or just go wrong in some part. [130 words]
I Died For You (Poetry) A poem talking about how much you love someone that you would do some horrible things just for them to know how much you love them! [126 words]
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Why Can't I Have You
Karina Lizet Perez
I'm always asking myself why can't I have you?
Why can't you be mine? After i'ved asked myself
I start to cry now that I'm done crying I think to
myself "You will never love me like I love you...
So why 'em I living this life without you so
after the crying and thinking I put it to an
end that was made by the trigger of my pain lying
down dead on the floor the phone rings as heaven
calls it was him who was calling to tell me he
really liked me...Dead and half way up the stair
way to heaven I come back down and say I cannot
leave for I am still alive.
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READER'S REVIEWS (4)
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"Hey, It's me the author of this poem...as most people know i used to just write songs but i started writing poems like around April 6 '03...not that long ago so i hope you check out my poetry as well as my songs and please leave reviews it makes me really happy to hear what people think of my work." -- Karina.
"Don't give the whole story away in the description! Let the reader be surprised! The thing that bothered me about the poem itself was the length of the lines. I think that it would flow better (and make more sense) if they were shorter (ex I'm always asking myself/Why can't I have you?...After I've asked myself/I start to cry/Now that I'm done crying..."). But that's just my opinion. I don't like the last part where she, apparently, comes back to life. That doesn't make sense to me. It would be more poignant if it ended with "halfway up the stair to Heaven." And him telling her he "really liked [her]" sounds extremely juvenile. Have him tell her he loves her." -- Wolfa.
"i half agree with wolfa but i think the description of the poem is okay that made me want to read it. it is cool she came back to life, just leave it that way. i like poems that end like that. the immaginative/mystical type. and he shouldn't say that he loves her because he didn't notice her.its sweet." -- shawn w.
"Thanks Wolfa and Shawn for your reviews this actually was like one of my first poems i've ever really written in my life hehe, so thanks for the advice and comments.. Luvz YA!" -- Karina.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2003 Karina Lizet Perez |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
April 2003 |
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