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Heaven... by Jasmine P Batey Another little poem about BOTHE suicide AND love. [140 words]
Why The Gun?
Estimated Love by Amarjit Bhambra Love has its values in measures, amounts and cost... [74 words]
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Wonderful World by Green Emerald - [154 words]
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What I Couldn't Live Without by Green Emerald - [135 words]
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The You by Andrews - [16 words]
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The Pure Love by Andrews - [49 words]
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The Girl In The Mirror by Emily Maria Wallman - [183 words]
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Thank You Great Britain by Green Emerald - [200 words]
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TITLE (EDIT)
Why The Gun? |
DESCRIPTION
Just a small poem
[95 words] |
AUTHOR
Jasmine P Batey |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Hi! My name is Jasmine Batey, I was born in '94, so at the moment I'm 16, I enjoy writing poetry, lyrics and stories, I love listening to music, mainly rock and all of it's sub - genres, and i REALLY LOVE getting comments on story mania! so please leave feedback and I will update regularly!
enjoy reading!
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AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (31)
Because You (Songs) um a song about love, when the person doesn't know that you like them [143 words]
Before The Hero (Poetry) i don't know where to go with it after this [36 words]
Don't Let Me Drown (Poetry) - [43 words]
Ever Again. (Poetry) um.... i was angry... and yes -it is about murder. [78 words]
Every One Leaves (Poetry) just a poem about how i feel sometimes. [32 words]
Every Things Alright (Poetry) - [110 words]
God, If You're Up There... (Poetry) My prayer [39 words]
Heaven... (Poetry) Another little poem about BOTHE suicide AND love. [140 words]
I Love You Baby (Poetry) A small love poem [107 words]
I Want You To See Me (Poetry) - [102 words]
Is It Worth Being Alone? (Poetry) Again, a sneak peak into my Life [89 words]
Jack The Ripper (Poetry) a small jokey poem, written for fun as a tongue-in-cheek thing. as the title says, It's about Jack the Ripper. [77 words]
Just Open My Eyes (Poetry) - [135 words]
Love Is A Despair (Poetry) - [92 words]
My Release (Poetry) a small poem about cutting (as you probably guessed) I know some one cutting and thats what inspired it. [75 words]
Nothings Wrong (Poetry) an inside view of me [13 words]
Numb (Poetry) To a certain someone, you really hurt me. [43 words]
One Of These Days (Poetry) I was dared to write a poem about a smile, I doubt that this is what she had in mind, but it IS a poem about a smile, so here is a poem, and i have 'Frankie' to thank for it. So thank you Frankie. [86 words]
Pain. Betrayal. Hurt. Anger.... (Poetry) just a poem about how i feel sometimes... [29 words]
Right Through Me (Poetry) - [161 words]
Saving Grace (Songs) Love again -- funny, my songs are about love and my poetry death.... hmmmm [84 words]
Take You Back Again (Poetry) - [119 words]
The Cloud (Poetry) again, a challenge I accepted from Frankie, the beginning is a bit bodgy, (the first stanza) anyway, please leave advice and comments, and I hope you like! [121 words]
The Devil Laughs (Poetry) - [85 words]
The Nightmares (Why) (Poetry) - [61 words]
The Only Casualty (Poetry) a small poem I wrote this morning -- haven't completed one about a smile yet but working on it!! -- It's not one of my best, it was a rush job so any feedback is not only welcome, but wanted. [59 words]
The Rose - By Jasmine Batey (Poetry) A story of love, a rose, and in a way, a story about love. [62 words]
The Screaming, The Anger, The Hurt And The Pain (Poetry) hope you enjoy and please comment -- not one of my best [108 words]
To My Sister (Poetry) basically a letter to my sister that im not brave enoug to deliver to her myself. [200 words]
When Summer Comes Again (Poetry) a small HAPPY poem :) [97 words]
You Are The Beat (Poetry) This could also be transformed into a song...? About ome one famous -- see if you can guess who =P [84 words]
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Why The Gun?
Jasmine P Batey
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why the gun?
why the harsh words?
why is ther no answer or return to my calls?
why? why does fire burn in youre eyes?
why dont you love me? why dont you care?
why dont you talk to me and tell me youll be there?
why? why the gun?
thats all i ask. theres one shot left and nothing else to live for now youre gone...
thats why.....
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"Well I believe it starts of good, hooks a reader in a bit. But in saying that I think the ending falls flat a little bit, but it's still a pretty good piece. Keep writing girlie! I would love for you to email me, your poetry really makes me feel the emotion you're portraying, and I'm strictly interested in poetry and emotion: frankiejackson@live.com.au" -- Frankie, AUSTRALIA MATE.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2006 Jasmine P Batey |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
March 2009 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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