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TITLE (EDIT)
Window-Shopping |
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A window cleaner falls in love with someone she notices as she is working. How will things work out?
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AUTHOR
Lisamarie Jones |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am 18 years old, and in October will be studying radio, film and telelvision with English. I love writing, and my ambition is to become a writer for telelvision, or a novelist.
[January 2000] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
lisamarie@bayly.co.uk |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (4)
Going, Going... (Short Stories) A man commits suicide, and then realises what he's missing. [1,330 words]
Hidden Reality (Short Stories) Christina's lunch-break is not quite as it seems. [736 words]
I Closed My Eyes (2) (Short Stories) After committing suicide, a young man realises what a mistake it was. [1,356 words]
On The Other Side (Short Stories) This is a story about a young girl who is tired of being pushed around. She takes matters into her own hands... [1,134 words]
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"This is a really good script." -- Robert K. Tarquinio, Santa Monica, CA, USA.
"Your dialogue is decent...but your story is extremely cliche and predictable... if you want to get noticed, write characters that are 3-dementional, interesting, odd, quirky (watch Being John Malkovich)...write what your really passionate about, I can tell that you have no passion for this script. I understand where you are coming from, I'm 18 also and ended up throwing out my first 3 scripts and never finishing them, until I got this one idea that I was really passionate about and I actually finished it. Starting out can be tough, the trick is to watch movies and really analyze why they worked..but most importantly, AVOID cliche, if it's been done before then it's a cliche. Love stories and overcoming fear have been done before... write about how you see the world (see AMERICAN BEAUTY) and good luck in the future :)" -- Carly.
"Hi Carly - You could tell I had no passion for this script? That's a shame, because I did. I put everything into it - I'm sorry you disliked it. Luckily for me, I got a very encouraging letter today from a British production company, saying pretty much opposite to you. Perhaps you're not an expert. Oh well, we'll see." -- Lisamarie Jones, Brasted, UK.
"I didn't mean to dis you, I was just trying to offer constructive critisim. Congrats on the production company. Hope it goes well." -- Carly.
"Carly - Sorry. I shouldn't have said what I did. Iwould try to explain, but there's not much point, so please, accept my apology." -- Lisamarie.
"Never have I been so insulted by a work of fiction. (At least I pray it's fiction) .This is truely the producted of a warped and twisted mind. I am not offended by the quality of the work , albiet unmitigated crap with nothing to merit or justify it. It is not your fault that you'r not a naturaly talanted writer but it is your duty to realise and accept this, rather than resorting to sensationalist shock tatics. Peadifillia is a highly sensative issuse which has affected many and should be traeted with sensitivity. I was deeply offendedby the promoting of such a cruel act and the inference that "The kiddies like it realy". I hope that others are equaly upset by this twisted work . I have read this screenplay and hope that because I have done this others will not have to. Take it from me that unless you are sexualy frustarated or a pervert/peadifile, this screenplay will sicken you. Stay away. Boycott this depravity!" -- Barry Noman.
"I just wanted to say that the above has nothing to do with this script. Well, perhaps the parts about not having talent or whatever, but I honestly can say there is nothing about paedophilia in this story. It's a love story between two adults, a man and a woman. There's not even any sex here! Anyway, just wanted to clear that up, and if the whoever who wrote to above would like to discuss this further, then please email me at lisamarie@bayly.co.uk I think you need to learn how to read." -- Lisamarie - The Writer, Brasted, UK.
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© 2000 Lisamarie Jones |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
January 2000 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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