Immortalized DreambyFred Hardy Suasidal theme. something I wrote a long time ago the words came very easy. and like most th... [172 words] One More TrybyFred Hardy Complicated lyrics fast pace music with great melody .still searching for answers. [230 words] How Is It Now!byFred Hardy hard to follow its like a really bad trip chorus is simple with repetition any comments good or... [248 words] My Angel ,My StarbyFred Hardy Speaks of the pain of living without someone who was very close. [161 words] The Sinfull Seduction Of A CommunistbyFred Hardy a point of view from the left on how american society has influenced the... [276 words] True To Your NamebyFred Hardy Sometimes it can be very confusing with all the complications that surround us choice are mad... [205 words] When Your SeventeenbyFred Hardy Misunderstood. very twisted look at the choice between life and death. in a world that has ... [359 words] You Had Lost Your WaybyFred Hardy Very slow with more tempo in the chorus a definite religious theme [193 words] Wating For A Message From GodbyFred Hardy Not a religious song. no more of revenge mode on a really bad break up. [240 words] You Think That You Know MebyFred Hardy Slow pace,a view from the left. [231 words] Yesterday's PastbyFred Hardy Not much flow but does speak out with imagination some religious people may be offended. [234 words] Here And GonebyFred Hardy Depression with susidal theme a definite rock song with more tempo in the chorus. [321 words] You Want It AllbyFred Hardy About the girl next door a very fast pace rock/alternative type song. [240 words] September RainbyFred Hardy One of those boring non imaginitve boy girl songs that have been done to death . [233 words] Somewhere(Part One)byFred Hardy Part one of three. [203 words] Another Night In ParadisebyFred Hardy Simple three cord progression the chorus sounds familiar plain rock no surprises lyri... [318 words] ConsumedbyFred Hardy It's about a girl who was just trying to be herself and trying to fit in to the world around her and t... [263 words] Arizona HeatbyFred Hardy A pop rock song with simple but catchy lyrics .any comments would be appreciated. [237 words] I Packed My BagsbyDesi Williams About how my parents don't appreciate me for who I am, and how sometimes, it gets to the point... [252 words] Like Raven Wings'byBrian C Lebron - [134 words] The Internal PleabyAmy Anderson Umm... about the people who bottle up their emotions and appear to be happy but on the inside... [285 words] Dark FatebyAmy Anderson I was heaps upset when I wrote it and yer... Tell me what you think. [222 words] 6 Foot UnderbyAmy Anderson A song I rote the otha night, half asleep and heeps upset.. tell me what you think. [294 words] .The Beach. ---Hasnt Got OnebyKasey Ann Miller I havent got a name yet,some sugestions please.. [122 words] Your Secret SinsbyAmy Anderson A song I wrote about... well I guess it might be obvious.. tell me what you think. [310 words] Your LullabybyAmy Anderson Another song, tell me what you think :) [221 words] Why? Why? How? To See His Own DeathbyJosh Earl This is a song about a kid that gets bullied so much through his life he ca... [245 words] Where Are We Now?byDesi Williams Sort of a poem song... wait. all songs are poems LOL... about how trapped I feel sometimes. ... [193 words] What's Dead Is GonebyAmy Anderson Another song about a friend... actually it's the same person... so as you've probably gathe... [144 words] What Will Become Of MebyMelanie West A slow but touching drama song. [113 words] Too ManybyAmy Anderson I wrote this a while ago and I wasnt guna put it on but oh well... Its about what I used to always wis... [184 words] To Set You Free From A Life With MebyJosh Earl This is a song about a guy that nows his girl friends life would be better ... [214 words] The Way It GoesbyAndrej Milec Dedicated to all those who love and have been loved. If you feel the last stanza is a bit diffe... [84 words] The UnnamedbyKasey Ann Miller Sorry ppls,the stupid thing screwed up my name etc,my real name is KASEY miller not KAREN miller...... [121 words] The Phsyco StreambyJosh Earl Its a very heavy song about ppl not takin shit of no one anymore. [124 words] The Ones UnnamedbyKaren Miller This song is kinda about me I guess,but also relates to other people,guy or girl,that feel lik... [128 words] The Hand You Have SoldbyJosh Earl This is a kinda stupid song its about no one I have meet yet but I am shore I will sum d... [114 words] The Description Of Beauty YoubyJosh Earl This is a song about a special person that has left alot of things in my mermorie... [132 words] Talk To MebySam Cheton It's a song I wrote for no particular reason kinda relates to me... [166 words] Suicide LullabybyKasey Ann Miller This is about a guy I love.... [133 words] Sonic BoombyJosh Earl This is about a person that never gives up to be with you even when you dont want them to...this is ... [173 words] Song Of My LifebyAndrej Milec Just how it all feels sometimes. [109 words] Should I Let You InbyCarla Thomson A slow rock song. [123 words] SacredbyAlina Grigoryan - [163 words] Rising Suns Of YoubyJosh Earl A softer song about a gurl want more clik in and read and tell me wat u think. [174 words] RevelationsbyJoel Aaron An invitation to discover who I am ,the part of me you cannot see. [151 words] Put Me DownbyAlina Grigoryan This song is not about me at all,though I wrote it. [140 words] Over ChangebyAmy Anderson Wrote it bout one of my friends... just thought of it off the top of mi head so I duno if its any g... [134 words] Only OnebyBrian C Lebron - [60 words] Old Man 2byAndrej Milec This one is more like a pop/rock song. Thought it up on my way home. [166 words] Nothing Less Then YoubyAmy Anderson Just came to me then... tell me what you think. [142 words] Not Loving YoubyAmy Anderson Umm... about some one who is in love with one person but can't stop thinking about some one else... [158 words] Never Lands PainbyJosh Earl This is a song about a kind of a nerd liking a realli popular chik and she never notices him i... [228 words] NatashabyAlina Grigoryan Just a funny one , nothing personal to Natashas:)) [66 words] Melody Of My TearsbyJosh Earl This is a song about a gurl I new who was very depressed at the time..... plz leave your com... [123 words] Maybe I'll Let GobyNash Song about the same girl it's always about:- [218 words] Looking At The Same Thing...Different! .. 6 Songs..byJane Ruth The song is about all of the different perspectives we have... [763 words] Little Black HookbyNash - [254 words] Liberty For LibertinesbyAlina Grigoryan A note *on 18th of may 1964 was a riot ( rockers etc.) [179 words] Know MebySam Cheton It's a song I wrote about how I feel about this guy I've liked 4ever. [122 words] Know Me (Revised)bySam Cheton It's Knew Me revised. I didnt like the other one as much. This one has rap in it... [115 words] Kewler Than You Or Me To HandlebyJosh Earl About alota faggets that think there to good for anyone. [252 words] Just A Little, BabybyDesi Williams How I'm feeling in the moment... [143 words] I'm Still AlivebyAmy Anderson Another song... same shit behind it... tell me what you think. [269 words] If You WannabyTom Bomb - [117 words] How Do I LivebyKym Whitney Um this is a song already made up by trisha yearwood....its like exactly how I feel for someone r... [188 words] Hope For The HelplessbyAmy Anderson About the people that make life so hard and the ones who give me strength to keep going..... [255 words] HappybySteph Kidd Its a rock song. me and my parents have been having some crazy times lately. theyre driving me insane...l... [124 words] Give Into The New AddictionbyKaren Miller --This is a song about a guy who im not to happy with at the moment. [117 words] Friday AfternoonbyCarla Thomson This song is kinda jazzy. if you just read it can sound depressing. but it sounds kool when it... [99 words] Feel SorrybyJannah Akira Bout me and how I feel. [208 words] Don't You RealizebyFinding Saturday Fs It's a song someone in my band wrote about a guy in our class. [101 words] Difunctional ThingsbyLuke Giddins About people I dont like and what I want them to do. [397 words] Depression--- Game OverbyJosh Earl This song is about anyone that has been depressed a song about the real life the happy ... [201 words] Comfort PlacebyChina Rose Marie Bullock Talks about the place you go to when you need your space. [130 words] Clones At HeartbyJosh Earl A very soft song think of vermillion pt 2 [136 words] Broken CinderellabyMelanie Geeregat Umm..don't really know what to say about this, wrote it about myself I guess... [174 words] Blood Stained TearsbyAmy Anderson Another song... leave a comment :) [225 words] Best Friend And Worst EnemybyDesi Williams Hard Rock lyrics... country sound... those two don't normally go together, huh? :) ... [154 words] Be My GuestbyAlina Grigoryan Song about me..i really felt like that in the moment I wrote this song Not a long one but with mus... [35 words] Awake--SleepbyJosh Earl This is a weird song about people that never want to sleep never wanna see what there nightmares b... [174 words] Single ChaoticbyAmy Anderson I was so sick of always getting the blame for anything and everything that ever went wrong.... a... [186 words] Without You In This Lonely WorldbyJennifer Cuartas A song about a guy I used to love who died. [66 words] With A Reason WhybyAryka - [279 words] Who Am I That Jesus Would Die For Me?byJessica L Young This song talks about wondering why Jesus would die for me. We are all si... [102 words] What Is HerebyJannah Akira Never look back. [130 words] Upside DownbyKatie C Johnson It's about a real life story that I had for a boy that I loved but things came between us and ended... [573 words] TraptbyAmy Anderson This song is pretty up beat all the way through and is especially faster in the chorus. It's about feelin... [164 words] There's No Sometimes With YoubyEllen E Watson Sometimes clouds turn into storms Sometimes sunshine shines on my day Sometimes s... [115 words] The One Who Aparts UsbyFahad Tauhid Lyrics about life: The most hated the most loved. Its quite metallic. [119 words] Thank You LordbyJessica L Young Song talks about thanking the Lord for everything...Med. paced... [77 words] Suicidal Self DesirebyJosh Anderson Lyrics; Through misery and self sacrifice, what is this world achieving? When sung, it is ... [176 words] Steak Night At Barnie'sbyLithium - [116 words] Stay Away From My WaybyDesi Williams It's a hard rock song... maybe not heavy metal... but definitely hard rock... punk... yea... [134 words] So SickbyNash Song about my repetetive confusion with the same girl. [163 words] She'll Make It ThrubyDri - [278 words] SaviourbyKaye Burland This is a song about a teenaged girl who feels empty and alone. [178 words] Red Eye SummerbyNash A little discription of my summertime. leave a review! [188 words] Not YoubyKelli L Potts This poem is about a kid being constanly pressured to be something they don't want to be. A very common... [102 words] My Melted OctoberbyKayla Hupp This song is basically a romance song. It tells about when my boyfriend whom I loved with all... [164 words] Mahal KitabyAmy Anderson Well.. mahal kita is filo for "i love you" and I wrote about my boyfriend who I have liked for along... [124 words] Lost In MindbyAmy Anderson Just another song... hope you like it. [211 words] Left To BurnbyAmy Anderson Another song... so f*n cut wen I rote it.. plz read it n tell me wat u think :) [296 words] Jesus You ArebyJessica L Young My last song that I wrote. I am working on writing more...This song is fast paced... [112 words] Jesus Is TherebyJessica L Young Song tells you that Jesus will never leave you nor forsake you. He'll always be there when you n... [105 words] ImperfectbyNash Lol I decided to do more of a wierd theme this time instead of a straight out song. I like it, I migh... [183 words] If Only You CouldbyNash Song about alot of things. I took some of the comments on my other songs and peoms into cons... [167 words] I Love You JesusbyJessica L Young A little chorus I made up...Fast paced... [39 words] Four WallsbyBrian C Lebron - [93 words] Enter InsanitybyAmy Anderson I wrote this song after I had been sitting down for a while thinking about my life, I realised t... [218 words] Ends HerebyAmy Anderson Another fast, heavy song... feel free to say anything you want about it... good or bad, it's all good... [232 words] Christmas DaybyFred Hardy Simple melody catchy,not every thing is as it seems. [211 words] BulletsbyLode Loyens Song about the real violence and hardship for someone born in the inner city or ghetto. [133 words] Broken Promises(Monday Never Came)byBabe I got hurt too many times and let it happen again, I had to get it out some ... [189 words] Bleeding TearsbyAmy Anderson Another song.... alot of emotion behind it. [163 words] All I Need 2byDesi Williams This is a slightly different version of the first one... no swear words. [166 words] AchebyAmy Anderson I'm not sure I really like this song.... I was so cut when I wrote it so I don't think I put much effort i... [165 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
hello everyone, i hope that you like my work.. i'm a 19 year old girl who uses writing as an outlet.. some of my work isn't the best but there's a few pieces out there worth reading.. i started writing these posts when i was 14.. and i haven't taken the time to weed out really anything that's a little dull.. well anyways.. hope you enjoy what you do read *Smiles* always, ~Carla [January 2009]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (105) A Card For My Love (Poetry) Ok... this isn't a card I sent to anyone... and no one sent this to me... i wrote this for my art class and I thought it was good enough to post,,, so what do you think? [92 words] A Fleck Of Sand (Poetry) - [115 words] A Letter To You (Poetry) It's a letter to the only guy I've ever loved. it's letting him know how I feel, an opology, and letting him know that I've changed.... well read the thing... what do get out of it?... i never did sen... [232 words] A Place In My Memories (Poetry) - [84 words] Alarm Clock (Poetry) - [91 words] Another Long Summer (Poetry) What can I say summer can be boring when all your friends are out of town. [232 words] [Teenage] Can't Get Away (Poetry) - [78 words] Class After Lunch (Poetry) - [134 words] Confused (Poetry) - [19 words] Congratulations (Poetry) I wrote this for an art project at school... we have to make 3-4 card and this was one of them.. hope you like it... and I hope my teacher does too...lol. [55 words] Crying At Night (Poetry) - [62 words] Cute Little Kids (Poetry) - [63 words] Dad (Poetry) This poem is about my dad, and how he let my step-mom take over. My brother and I moved out after having to dealing with 4 1/2 years of her of her bullshit. And I pray to god that she doesn't treat Ta... [126 words] Dear Friend (Songs) - [167 words] Do I? (Poetry) - [102 words] Do You Really Like Me? (Poetry) - [114 words] Drama (Poetry) - [68 words] Drea (Poetry) - [209 words] Dumped For The First Time (Poetry) - [134 words] Empty Room (Songs) - [116 words] Everyone's Crap (Poetry) - [249 words] Expanding My Horizon (Poetry) - [164 words] First Time In 3 Months (Poetry) It's about the day I saw my friend val again. [128 words] Flash-Backs (Songs) This is a country song that I wrote on the date of: 10-24-04. [165 words] Fly Like A Sparrow (Poetry) - [64 words] Friday Afternoon (Songs) This song is kinda jazzy. if you just read it can sound depressing. but it sounds kool when its being sung. [99 words] Get Out Of My Head (Poetry) - [205 words] Getting Back On Track (Poetry) - [98 words] God Please Help Me (Poetry) - [51 words] Hidden Beauty (Poetry) - [121 words] Hope You're Lucky (Poetry) - [77 words] How Do I Say It? (Poetry) - [133 words] I Feel So Used (Poetry) - [116 words] If You Were Here (Poetry) - [56 words] I'll Try For You (Poetry) - [117 words] I'm A Bitch! (Poetry) ok... this is about me, how i lost my verginaty to my friend's guy, and how i feel about that... [297 words] It's My Birthday! (Poetry) I just wrote it... tell me what you think... I think it get's a little of the subject... all well... hope you enjoy it [198 words] It's Not All About Sex (Non-Fiction) You'll find out. [383 words] It's Only A Dream (Poetry) - [77 words] Just Hold Me (Songs) - [156 words] Just Respect Me (Poetry) Guys annoy me when they don't know how to show respect... what else can I say... they piss me off. [99 words] Kid Without A Clue (Poetry) - [55 words] Lets Clean The Slate (Poetry) Something I just wrote.. I see more than one meaning in it.. well it's here for everyone to enjoy... would love some feed back... keep on smiling... because smiles sure make my day! [91 words] Life Wasted Sitting (Poetry) - [99 words] Looking Back At You (Poetry) This is about a person that I spent a lot of time with last summer. i don't think that the title really fits this poem.. but it's gunna have to do until I think of somethink else. [141 words] Matthew (Poetry) Well you know who you are.. lol i just read your poem... I thought you'd like a poem more than a review... you write for me so just thought I could write a little something for you... it's a I had tro... [122 words] Maybe More Than A Friend (Poetry) - [60 words] Midnight Rain (Poetry) I wrote it last night and would love some feedback... anything would good. [148 words] Missing You Still (Poetry) The only guy i've ever loved... thinking about him still... I left him about a year ago... [129 words] My Parents And Myself (Non-Fiction) It's basicly me bitching about my parents. [1,277 words] [Teenage] My Second Chance (Poetry) - [115 words] My Writing Lately (Poetry) It sucks [145 words] Nature Of The Seasons (Poetry) - [62 words] [Nature] No More Creeps For Me (Poetry) - [78 words] One Of My Prayers (Poetry) I just started to write what I was feeling and as I wrote I was prying... I guess I just don't know what I want really... I just pray that God will take the hurt away. [301 words] Only Curious (Poetry) - [122 words] Picture (Poetry) - [101 words] Please Smile For Me (Poetry) - [87 words] Praising Him (Poetry) - [100 words] Quinton (Poetry) - [194 words] [Relationships] Rejection (Poetry) - [107 words] Restless Slumber (Poetry) - [74 words] Scorpio (Poetry) - [116 words] Shocked (Poetry) - [74 words] Should I Let You In (Songs) A slow rock song. [123 words] Sitting Alone (Songs) A country song. well its just something I came up with thinking of other peoples' lives. it has nothing to do with me, but there are people out there that have to deal with what I wrote. [146 words] Someone (Poetry) Someone that I knew back in middle school... I just want to get to know him better... he'd a good friend... now all you readers don't get the wrong idea... ok if you want to you can... but that is not... [100 words] Still Waiting (Poetry) - [95 words] Stop Looking To The Skies (Poetry) - [45 words] Stress (Poetry) - [302 words] The Age Of The Less Forgotten (Poetry) I don’t really understand it, even though I wrote it. these words just came to me; so I wrote them down. maybe someone can tell me what it really means… because I’m really at a loss here. [83 words] The Break Up (Poetry) - [126 words] The Girl In The Corner (Poetry) - [89 words] The Joy Of A Teen's Room (Poetry) Well... my room is one of those kool attic rooms... when i'm done painting it it's going to be spiffy cool with tuns of different colors.... well I don't usually keep my room a mess but i've been bizz... [158 words] The Outside (Poetry) - [100 words] The Things We Go Through (Poetry) The person that this is talking about is me... when it says "you" it's talking about me. [171 words] The Way That I See It (Poetry) - [120 words] They Said They Wouldn't (Poetry) - [79 words] Thinking Of My Past (Poetry) - [81 words] Thinking Of Yashua (Poetry) What do yhou think?... it's just somthing that kind of came to me... didn't spend a whole lot of time on it... i'd like some feedback. [159 words] This Weekend (Poetry) - [242 words] Thoughts On Life (Poetry) Thoughts and questions about life... stuff I was thinking about [189 words] Time To Smile (Poetry) - [71 words] Tk (Poetry) - [204 words] Turn Down The Sound (Poetry) - [62 words] Val (Poetry) - [85 words] Walked Around Town (Songs) - [115 words] Wanting Something (Poetry) Just something I wrote... I don't know. [113 words] What Do I Want? (Poetry) - [137 words] When It Knocks (Poetry) - [90 words] Where Is It? (Poetry) - [53 words] Where My Thoughts Lay (Poetry) this is about my ex-fiancé and myself ... a little bit of what i'm feeling right now i couldn't really think of a title that suits this poem [139 words] Why Am I Single? (Poetry) - [116 words] Winter's Trees (Poetry) - [20 words] Wish To Be A Child (Poetry) - [185 words] Writer's Block (Poetry) - [71 words] Yet Another Ending (Poetry) more like a letter than a poem... an ending of a sexual friendship with an ex... an ex that's hard to let go of, yet seems to know how to break a girls heart time and time again.. so it's my turn to d... [206 words] You Are There (Songs) Well it's a song I just wrote... I might add one more verse... [49 words] You Her And Me (Poetry) - [183 words] You Love Her (Poetry) - [120 words] You Need A Beating! (Poetry) - [142 words] .Always There. (Songs) This is a song that I wrote last summer... I'm just now getting to put it on this site... lol... I hope you enjoy it! [151 words] .Just Let Me Be. (Poetry) - [221 words] [Teenage] .Moving On. (Poetry) - [100 words] .Why Do You Hide Me?. (Poetry) - [102 words]
.The Beach. Carla Thomson
Sand on a beach
Water on my feet
The wind in my face
Oh, yeah
I walked around the bend
You’re sittin’ on a bench
That’s when our eyes first met
Now, sand on the beach
Water on our feet
The wind’s in our faces
We walked and we talked
We couldn’t stop a laughin’,
That’s when he held my hand
(Softer and slower)
The sand at the beach
His feet in the water
His hair flyin’ in the wind
Sand at the beach
Water on our feet
The wind’s in our faces
We talked and we talked
We couldn’t stop a laughin’,
That day he tried to kiss me
But I told him no
He really does respect me
He really makes me happy
That day at the beach
And our water-logged feet
(Softer and slower)
Sand at the beach
Our feet in the water
Our hair flyin’ in the wind
A day at the beach
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"the words had good flow with a good use of a rhyme.only you really know what the sound is 'anyways a great effort. better then most i've read on this site " -- fred hardy, hamilton, ontario, canada.
"i'd have to agree with fred.. i liked it. had a good sense of flow to it, there's only a few country songs that really grab my attention, i'd like to hear this n see if it does lol, off paper it looks like it might:):) well done.." -- baker.
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