Mosiah's Moon (6)
David Duane Fortner

 

ANDERSON
My men will be driving through
the night to get there. I don’t
want them out during the eclipse,
so make sure the elevator’s there
in plenty of time. You’ll need to
keep both parties apart until the
time is right. What’s your plan?

ROGERS
I’ve got them administering sick
call until eight o’clock. It may
take a few minutes to get all the
inmates cleared out and settled
down, but once the movie begins,
your men can move in.
ANDERSON
What’s the movie?

ROGERS
2010: Odyssey Two. I thought it
apropos.

ANDERSON
It certainly is. That’s when we
make contact.

ROGERS
Excuse me?

ANDERSON
2010, . . . tomorrow night.

ROGERS
Oh, right. 8:10. Say, Ed, I was
just wondering, since your going
to do away with them anyway . . .

ANDERSON
Sorry, Ed. We need all their parts
intact.

ROGERS
Oh. Right. Well. I’ll make sure
they’re together and alone; the
rest is up to you and your men.

A knock comes on the door and Rogers jumps in his chair, jarring the top desk drawer open.

ANDERSON
Relax, Ed. I’ll handle him.

When Rogers opens the door, David is on the other side.

ROGERS
David, we were just talking about
you. Please, come in. I’ll leave
you to it, Ed.

As Rogers exits, David is still feeling the effects of the alcohol. He sways a bit, before taking a seat in front of the desk. He is feeling good, until Anderson speaks.

ANDERSON
What the hell did you think you
were doing? “Just find out how
it works”, that’s what I said.
Radiation levels went through
the roof. Nothing was mentioned
about turning the damn thing on.

DAVID
Hey, bite me, Mr. Ed. Turning it
on was the only way to find out
how it worked. Why am I talking
to you again? Where the hell is
Sal? He supposed to be my contact.

ANDERSON
He’s on another assignment. I . . .

Glancing at the wall mirror, David is pleased with his features. His attention is drawn to a blue light, blinking in the open desk drawer.

ANDERSON
Guitar, I’m talking to you!

DAVID
(facing front)
I hear you, Ed. Where’s Wilbur?

ANDERSON
Look, departure is at 2100 hours
tomorrow. Your complete analysis
is to be in the data base by 1930.

DAVID
Why? Aren’t you sending escorts?

ANDERSON
Additional precautionary measure.

DAVID
Is someone, I mean other than you,
after my ass? You wouldn’t be tryin’
to . . . assinate me, would you?
 
ANDERSON
What’s wrong with you? Of course
not. It’s in case you’re impacted
on route. There’s no atmosphere
up there to slow anything down . . .

DAVID
Spare me the science lesson, Ed.
I know you’d like to impact my
route. You just remember what I
said, . . . “Don’t ever touch”.

ANDERSON
Are you feeling alright?

DAVID
Hey, I'm on the dark side of the
moon here? So I made it shine a
little; no big deal.

(laughing)

I mean, I made a little shine.
Hey, that works both ways. Have
you ever heard of synon . . .
synona-mouse. . . it's like
double-speak, only better. . .

ANDERSON
I’ll open up a secure line for you
tomorrow. So, you’ll transfer the
data by 1930, right?

DAVID
Right.

ANDERSON
You better clean up your act.
Anderson out.

DAVID
Don’t you tell me . . . Did he
just call me a pig?

Once the screen is clear, David walks to the open drawer and stares down at the phone. From the office window, he can see Rogers, heading his way. Closing the drawer, he quickly moves to the office door. The moment he opens it, Rogers steps in.

ROGERS
Are we all finished?
DAVID
I truly hope so, . . . Ed.

Rogers eyes him suspiciously, as David totters away.

EXT. LUNAR COMMUNICATION CENTER NIGHT

McCurry is in the dining hall having dinner with Phillip, while they go over requisition orders.

PHILLIP
Well, Senator, I’m very sorry we
couldn’t be more helpful, but as
you can see, well, there’s really
nothing left to see.

McCURRY
I guess we better head back then.

PHILLIP
We’ll be leaving tomorrow, after
the eclipse. It will take a few
hours to cool down. Surface temp-
eratures will exceed 600 degrees.
If you’d like to watch it, I’ve
reserved a front row seat for
you, on the observation deck.

McCURRY
That would be fine. Oh, Phillip,
your two doctors have come up
missing; no one seems to be able
to find them.

PHILLIPS
Oh, . . .they’re about. Probably
just finishing up their rounds.

McCURRY
No, I had them check. They’re not
anywhere on the station, Captain.
After the eclipse, I’d like to
see if we might locate them.

PHILLIP
(surprised)
If they’re not hear, Senator, I
wouldn’t know where to look?
McCurry stands and walks to the window. He waits for Phillip to arrive, then points to a single set of rover tracks, trailing toward the far side of the moon.

McCURRY
I should think we just follow
those tracks.

Phillip begins to look sick.

McCURRY
No need to call anyone, Captain,
I’ve already checked with staff.
They agree with you; and they
know of no reason a rover would
head in that direction. I was
concerned, so I had my people
call your people. In the spirit
of cooperation, they’ve agreed to
make another rover available to
us, after the eclipse of course.

(beat)

Front row seat you say? Captain,
. . .are you ill?

INT. PRISON LOWER FLOOR NIGHT

Still feeling the effects of the booze, David is teetering back to his room when he hears the voice of HAL.

HAL
Just what do you think you’re
doing, Dave?

He stops in his tracks and smiles. He turns slowly around.

DAVID
Sal? I’ll be damned! How the
hell did you find me?

When he realizes there’s no one there, he follows the voice to the cafeteria entrance.

HAL
Dave, I can see you’re really
upset about this.
A group of inmates are watching “2001: A Space Odyssey”, on the prison monitor. Several guards are also in attendance. Marcus is leaning against the side of a wall. Once he notices David, he walks over. When David sees him, he chuckles.

MARCUS
What’s so funny?

DAVID
Oh, I was just thinking about
changing my name.

MARCUS
I couldn’t see from down here.
What did they say?

DAVID
Oh, they’re going to assinate us.

MARCUS
They’re going to what?

DAVID
Assassinate us. They’ll be here
tomorrow night.

MARCUS
Do you know when?

DAVID
Sometime after 1930. Anderson
wants me to have all the data
transferred by then. I found my
terraphone in Rogers office.

MARCUS
So?

DAVID
So, it’s blinking. I’m supposed
to be undercover, remember? Sal
would never try to contact me
unless I was in some deep shit.

MARCUS
These people that are coming,
your . . . assinators, can you
ID them?
DAVID
Well, it is a black bag operation;
perhaps I can check their luggage?

MARCUS
That's it then. We go, first thing
in the morning.

DAVID
Go where?

MARCUS
We’re taking over the prison.

As they stare at one another, David smirks.

DAVID
When?

MARCUS
Tomorrow morning.

DAVID
Oh really?

MARCUS
Yes, . . . really.

INT. PYRAMID TOMB NIGHT

With a flashlight for a nightlight and a backpack for a pillow, Beth lays shivering in a corner.

EXT. LUNAR SURFACE NIGHT

The elevator rises above ground and it’s doors open. Miles away, the lunar rover advances toward the prison.

INT. CAFETERIA MORNING

Rogers and Walker are having breakfast when several fights break out simultaneously. Once Rogers gives the okay, Walker claps his hands and the guards move swiftly toward the combatants. The moment the inmates are surrounded, Walker steps into the center and pulls out his electric stick. When Marcus stands, Walker glares at him.


WALKER
Not this time, Messiah. Alright,
give it to ‘em, boys!

ROGERS
MR. WALKER!

Walker flashes a scowl at one of his men. Noticing the terror in the guard’s eyes, he glances around the area and discovers that not only do the remaining inmates have his guards surrounded, they hold hypos to each of their throats. Seeking guidance, Walker eyes Rogers, and the needle David is holding to his throat.

DAVID
Mr. Rogers, I’m afraid your days
as an administrator are over. I
mean, the lab is seriously over-
stocked and now I’ve got a report
to write! There’s way too much
formaldehyde and way, way too many
syringes. Wait! What say you hold
them pig stickers for a moment,
boys, maybe there’s a way to cover
this? I hear you’re really into
taxidermy, Ed?

Rogers remains frozen to his seat as David continues.

DAVID
Well, perhaps you can tell us,
Mr. Rogers, what happens if we
decide to . . . shoot up your
neighborhood?

ROGERS
The men and I will suffer slow
. . .excruciatingly painful. . .
deaths.

DAVID
I thought you could.

MARCUS
Once again, Mr. Walker; this time,
give it new meaning.

Walker thinks about it for a moment, then gives the order.
WALKER
Give it to ‘em, boys.

As the guards slowly raise their electric sticks into the air, the inmates disarm them.
 
MARCUS
Synonymous speech, Mr. Walker;
a mark of higher intelligence.

Bam Bam moves quickly to where Rogers is sitting and snatches him off the ground. As he begins to strangle him, Marcus and David rush over.

MARCUS
Bam, please, put him down. It’s
not our way.

Bam stops throttling him, but continues to hold Rogers off the ground by his neck.

BAM
You know what he did to me.

MARCUS
Yes, I know what he did. We
need to talk about that, and
we will . . .

DAVID
Marcus, it’s real good that you
can get him to talk about it,
but . . . Rogers is turning red.

MARCUS
Our self-worth is in our minds,
brother, not in our bodies.

DAVID
I think we got blue; well, he’s
also pale, so, cerulean. We got
cerulean.

BAM BAM
But he . . .

MARCUS
Bam, we’re about to start some
real shit here now so, DROP IT!

Bam drops Rogers to the floor. David pulls him to his feet. As Rogers tries to regain his breath, David smiles at Marcus.

DAVID
Drop it? You're really into this
synonymous speech shit aren't you?
Move your ass, Ed. I gotta make
a phone call and you gotta open
up your office.

BAM BAM
I’ll make sure he does.

As the three leave the room, Marcus steps onto a table and addresses the inmates.

MARCUS
Gentlemen, we’re about to engage
in a fight for our very lives.
Yesterday’s work crew, secure the
guards. The rest of you, put the
suits on. You need to see what
you’ll be fighting for.

INT. WARDENS OFFICE

While David watches, Bam forces Rogers to open up his desk drawer. Once done, David pulls out his phone. He smiles when he sees that the BLUE CONTACT LIGHT is still blinking. He carefully pushes RECEIVE, picks up the headset, and waits.

DAVID
Come on, Sal, pick up the phone.

INT. PYRAMID CATACOMB

As Beth lays sleeping in a dark corner of the room, a single ray of light shines from a crack in the roof, onto her backpack. Inside, the portable phone’s RED RECEIVE LIGHT is blinking. She stretches, then eyes her surroundings. Noticing the sunlight, she slowly follows it to her bag, then reaches for it. When she sees the RED LIGHT, she instantly grabs the phone headset and sits up.

(split screen)

INT. CATACOMBS

BETH
Hello? Is anyone there?

David? Is that you?

Oh, David. I love you.

         (crying)
Earlier, when I thought you were lost, I tried to help
find you; but I know now that
INT. ROGERS OFFICE

DAVID
Beth? Is that you?

It's me babe.

I love you too, sweetheart.

Oh honey, don't be so hard on yourself; I feel lost without you too. But you know, in
these last few days, I think
I’m the one that’s really lost, . . . because of you.

I’M LOST ASSHOLE, BECAUSE OF YOU! You were going to Giza! Sal said you were lost, so we organized a search of Khufu. We fell through the floor and now I’m lost in the catacombs!
 
I’m sorry David, but Sal’s dead. When we both fell, I landed on top of him.

He wasn’t much of a friend, David; he brought me here.

David, please, where are you?


Right, you’re on . . .Did you just say you were on the moon? WELL HOW THE HELL DO YOU PLAN TO GET ME OUT OF HERE?

Okay, but you’ll have to teach me how to operate this phone.

Holy shit! I just remembered, I’ve still got four hundred inmates to find! I've really found myself. So, . . . where are you?

Okay, calm down. I’ll get you out. Where’s Sal?





Sal . . .dead? Beth, . . .Sal, . . .was my best friend.


Sal was always trying to be accepted by the wrong people.

You probably won’t believe this . . .but I’m on the moon.

Relax. I’m going to give you some numbers to call. These are the good guys. They will come and rescue you, okay?

No problem. We’ll have you out of there in no time.

No you don’t. They’re up here with me. They built a prison inside the moon see and, well, lets get you out of there first . . .


INT. MOON CAVE

Marcus has gathered the inmates in front of the wall. He and Jesse begin to turn the two dials toward the sun icon.

EXT. LUNAR SURFACE DAY

The sun is shining brightly where the lunar rover has stopped. An agent gets out. As the vehicle begins to back up, the agent guides it under a ridge. Once the rover has been secured in the shade, the two agents begin to make their way up the hill, toward the open elevator.

INT. WARDEN'S OFFICE

Rogers is sitting in a chair as David teaches Beth how to operate her phone. To Rogers dismay, Bam Bam begins rummaging through his possessions.

DAVID
You see those two dials on the
side? One is longitude and the
other is latitude. Turn each of
them to the set of the numbers
I just gave you.

Bam Bam continues to pick things up and smash them on the floor. The noise is beginning to irritate David.

DAVID
Hold on a minute, Babe. Bam, what
the hell are you looking for?

BAM
Something that belongs to me.

Bam glares angrily at Rogers, then continues searching. David scratches his head and glances at Rogers. When Rogers leers back, David grimaces.

DAVID
Oh my God! BAM’S BALLS?! You are
one sick fuck, you know that, Ed!

Rogers seems nervous when Bam begins to push buttons on his desk console. Suddenly a side closet door opens and “Black Magic Woman” starts to play over the intercom system. Bam and David stare in amazement into the closet filled with women’s nightgowns. Several pictures depicting Rogers wearing the negligees, hang on the inside door. As Bam sits back to eye an attractive BLACK NIGHTIE, Rogers raises up in his chair.

ROGERS
NO! DON’T DO THAT!

David, noticing Rogers anxiety, focuses on the console where Bam is sitting.

DAVID
What’s goin’ on, Ed?
 
Rogers relaxes in his chair. As Bam raises from the desktop, David moves over to the console. Looking down, he sees the elevator control is switched to open. He notices a surface monitor switch.

DAVID
What’s the elevator doing on
the surface? Expecting someone?

When David turns the switch, a camera in the elevator reveals two men approaching; both are carrying black bags.

DAVID
Anderson’s assinators? Shit!?
They really carry black bags?

When David moves back to the switch, Rogers goes berserk. When he lunges toward David, Bam catches him in a bear hug.

ROGERS
THE ECLIPSE, IT’LL BE HERE WITHIN
MOMENTS! YOU’VE GOT TO GET THOSE
MEN INSIDE . . . OR THEY’LL DIE!

David glares at Rogers, then at BAM.

DAVID
Well, what do ya think, Bam?

  BAM BAM
I say, FRY ‘EM!

DAVID
Sorry, Ed; looks like they didn’t
make it.
David closes the switch, then continues speaking with Beth.

DAVID
Beth, are you still there?

EXT. LUNAR SURFACE

As the two agents get within a few yards of the elevator, the doors suddenly close and the elevator begins lowering. They run to it. When it becomes evident they are too late, they decide to wait a moment for it’s return.

INT. MOON CAVE

Once they have brought the small triangles together as one, the giant triangle starts to radiate, illuminating the entire region. The inmates crowd around the edge of the chasm, and stare in awe, at the valley paradise below.

INT. CATACOMBS

BETH
YES I’M STILL HERE! Now, what’s
this about Bam Bam’s balls? Oh,
oh, wait a minute, . . . some-
thing’s happening here.

Beth suddenly finds herself standing in paradise again.

INT. WARDEN'S OFFICE

DAVID
Beth, what’s wrong?


Hey look, I’ll make the call. You just take it easy.

Beth? WHAT'S WRONG? BETH? ARE YOU THERE? INT. CATACOMBS

BETH
Oh, I’m having visions again.
It’s nothing I can’t handle.

OH MY GOD! DAVID! HELP ME!

Suddenly the line goes dead. By now, Rogers has a headache. Tired of David's panic, he yells from his chair.

ROGERS
You can't transmit during the
eclipse, . . . idiot!

Bam moves swiftly behind the chair and wraps his hands around Roger's throat.

DAVID
Oh, I'm the idiot? I didn't steal
family jewels from a giant, Jack!

As Bam begins to tighten his grip around Rogers' throat, Rogers pleads for mercy with his eyes. While he chokes Rogers, Bam looks to David for guidance. Once David shakes his head no, Bam reluctantly releases his grip.

EXT. LUNAR SURFACE

By now, the eclipse has begun and the sun is getting hotter and brighter. The agents attempt to make a run for the rover, but within a few seconds, their suits begin to melt. Within minutes, the two combust and burn to death.

INT. MOON CAVE

The giant triangle gives off a blinding light, forcing the inmates to cover their eyes.

EXT. MOON

A tremendous beam of light emits from the center of the moon,
shooting directly toward earth.

EXT. GIZA, EGYPT DAY

A tremendous beam of light shoots down from the sky, striking the top of the Pyramid of Khufu. Within seconds, the desert is changed into a GARDEN OF EDEN. The beam continues on for several moments until the desert is permanently transformed.

Beth suddenly finds herself standing outside the pyramid, in the center of a beautiful garden, holding on tight to the satellite phone. As she begins to walk around, she sees a waterfall. She runs to the receiving pool, bends down and quenches her thirst.

EXT. SOUTH AMERICA, PACIFIC OCEAN

In a darkened sky, a golden triangle glows from the center of the moon.


EXT. GIZA DAY

As the eclipse begins to end, Beth is busy sampling fruit from the trees. Once the eclipse has ended, she hears David's voice once again on the terraphone.

(split screen)

INT. ROGERS OFFICE

        DAVID
Beth? Are you there?

Is something wrong?



Hey, whatever you do, don’t eat the fruit.

Relax; we’ve got one too. EXT. GARDEN PARADISE

          BETH
All there? No. But I'm here.

Wrong? Nothings wrong. I’m standing in the Garden of Eden. What could be wrong?

Too late. Really, David, this is a serious place.

Suddenly, Beth sees someone, walking in the sunlight.

BETH DAVID
David, someone’s coming!

OH MY GOD! Can you see who it is?

God? Really? Be polite.

As the being nears, his identity becomes apparent.

BETH
David, it’s Sal! He’s alive! DAVID
Sal’s alive? Are you sure?

Within a few moments, Sal is standing before Beth, in a daze.

              BETH
Oh, it’s Sal alright. Hold on.

SAL
Beth, where are we? We fell; I
remember that. You landed on top
of me, then, . . . what happened?
Did I die? Is this heaven?

Beth holds out the phone to Sal and frowns.


SAL
Who is it?

BETH
Your long lost friend.

Sal tentatively answers the phone.

DAVID
Salvadore?!

YOU’RE A DEAD MAN!

How dare you take Beth on a wild goose chase like that?
As far as I’m concerned, Sal, you go directly to hell! SAL
David?! You’re here too?

I am? So, this is heaven!

I do? Wait a minute. Who put you in charge? We’ve got a conflict of interest. I want to speak to someone else!

INT. MOON CANYON

The inmates are enjoying the garden as BLACK MAGIC WOMAN continues to play over the intercom. Marcus and David talk as
they watch Jesse and Bam soak in a hot spring.

MARCUS
Great music never dies. So how’s
Beth?

DAVID
She’s having a hard time dealing
with reality, but she’ll be fine.

MARCUS
And Sal?

DAVID
The radiation must have healing
powers; before the eclipse, Sal
was definitely dead.

MARCUS
Is he going to help us?

DAVID
Yeah. You bring a guy back to

 

 

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