An Island Unto Himself (2)
Tony Mossor

 

The wall clock reads 5:18. Mike turns off the lights.

MIKE
Come on, there’s nothing we can do
for him. Besides, if ole Fish Fart
catches us hanging around we might
just be next.

KIMMY
( as they exit )
I feel so bad for the guy. He’s
really down.

INT. PARKING GARAGE - DUSK

The garage is empty except for the VW bus. Stu approaches it, thoroughly dejected. He climbs in, sighs and starts the engine. The bus lurches violently and stalls; the perfect
ending to a perfectly lousy day.

EXT. BASEBALL DIAMOND - NIGHT
A little league game is being played under the lights. A
RUNNER crosses home plate and the other RUNNERS advance.
The bases are loaded. Stu is the home plate umpire. He dons
his protective mask and settles in behind the CATCHER.
The next BATTER approaches the plate. His identity is
obscured by his batting helmet with protective face guard.
There is general chatter from the BALLPLAYERS.

BALLPLAYERS
( ad libs )
Hey batter, batter.

The PITCHER winds up and delivers the pitch. Close on Stu
and the batter as the ball crosses the plate. The batter
doesn’t swing.
STU
Stee-rike!

The batter turns, hands on hips and looks at Stu, his face
still obscured by the big helmet falling over his eyes.

STU
Play ball.

Again the pitcher delivers. Again no swing.

STU
Strike two!

The CROWD grows surly.

CROWD
( ad libs )
Ah, come on ump.

BATTER
( turning to Stu )
What are you, blind?

STU
Play ball, batter.

The pitcher delivers the next pitch. Again, no swing.

STU
Stee-rike three! Yer out!

Disappointed by the final out of the game, the runners
step off their respective bases and start the slow walk to
their dugout. In a huff, the batter turns to Stu and throws
his helmet revealing his identity; Stu’s 8 year old son, Brad.

BRAD
You’re crazy, you blind bastard!

STU
You can’t talk to an umpire like
that. You’re outa here!

BRAD
( throwing his bat )
You can’t throw me out ya freak,
the game’s over!

The opposing team’s COACH approaches Stu, laughing and slaps
him on the back.

COACH
Hey Blue, great game.

BRAD
Yeah, just great! Thanks Dad!

Brad kicks the dirt and storms off!

EXT. STEWART HOUSE - NIGHT

All is still and quiet except for the soothing sound of CRICKETS CHIRPING. The rattle-trap bus breaks the serenity
as it jerks and lurches into view around the corner and
disappears into the garage.

INT. STEWART GARAGE - NIGHT

The bus comes to a stop in front of Stu’s work bench. There
is chilly silence between Brad and Stu. Brad opens his door
to get out, illuminating the interior via the dome light.

STU
Brad, wait a second.

Brad stays seated but doesn’t look at his dad.

STU
I...I don’t know what to say.

Brad digs for something in his pocket and hands it to Stu.


BRAD
Here.

Stu examines it in the dim lighting. It’s three, dirty, old coins, attached by three, tiny chains to a single brass loop. The ancient coins are embossed with hieroglyphics.

STU
What’s this?

BRAD
Your birthday present. I bought it
with my own money.

STU
Ouch.

BRAD
It’s supposed to be a lucky charm.
The crazy old fart at the pawn shop
said it has magic powers or
something. You know, three wishes,
that kind of thing.

STU
I don’t know what to say. I love
it, Brad.

BRAD
( exiting the bus )
Yeah well, maybe you can wish for
a pair of glasses.

STU
Brad...

BRAD
( exiting the garage )
Happy friggin’ birthday, Blue...
bonehead.


Stu ponders the coins in his hand.

STU
( sarcastically )
Three wishes, huh?

He closes his fist around the coins, closes his eyes in
mock concentration and holds the coins to the bridge of his nose.

STU
I wish I wasn’t such a jerk.

He opens his eyes and turns the rear view mirror toward him.

STU
...Nope, I’m still me.

EXT. STEWART HOUSE - NIGHT

Stu exits the garage and heads for the house. A car comes
careening around the corner! It is Tiffy in the family car. She screeches to a halt, gets out and crosses in front of her dumbfounded father toward the house.

STU
Hold it right there, missy. I want
to talk you.

Tiffy ignores Stu.

STU
Tiffy...Tiffany Jane Stewart!

TIFFY
( stopping abruptly )
For the record, I don’t answer to
that bourgeois, Euro-American name
anymore. From now on, you may
kindly address me as Starlight.

STU
Oh, brother. Okay, whoever you
are, I want to talk to you.

TIFFY
About what?

STU
You’re smoking, aren’t you?

TIFFY
As if. Come on Dad, we’ve been
through this before. I don’t smoke.

Stu pulls an object from his pocket.

STU
It’s no use lying Starfire...

TIFFY
Starlight.

STU
Whatever.
( opening his hand to
reveal the pipe )
I’ve got you red handed this time.
Behold the smoking gun, or pipe
as it were.

Tiffy’s eyes bulge as she sees her marijuana pipe in her father’s possession. Mary opens the front door and sticks her head out.

MARY
Tiffy, someone’s on the phone for
you. He said his name is Moonglow
...or something like that.

Tiffy seizes the opportunity and bounds for the front door.

TIFFY
Coming, Mother!

Stu follows Tiffy up the front steps as she ducks in the door.

STU
Hey, I’m not finished... Mary
we need to talk to that girl.

MARY
Did you remember the milk, dear?

STU
Milk? No, I’ll get it later. We
have got to...

MARY
It will have to wait, Stu. I need
that milk a.s.a.p. I’m right in
the middle of making my famous
macaroni bake.

STU
But...
MARY
Get along little doggy. Shoo, shoo.
We’ll talk when you get back.

Stu reluctantly turns to go back down the steps.

STU
Well okay, but don’t let Tiffy go
anywhere...

The door slams unceremoniously behind him.

STU
...until I get back.

INT. STEWART GARAGE - NIGHT

Stu enters, clicks on the light and reaches into his pocket for the VW keys. He pulls out the three coins instead. He examines them closer.

STU
Weird.

He gets a rag from the work bench and starts cleaning the crusty, old trinket. He dabs some cleaning solvent onto the
rag and rubs more.

STU
I wonder what kind of coins these
are.

The coins don’t come very clean and Stu gives up. He doesn’t notice the coins starting to twinkle and climbs into the bus. He puts Tiffy’s pipe in the ash tray, starts the engine and drifts off into thought, subconsciously rubbing one of the coins between his thumb and fingers. He sees his reflection in the windshield.

STU
Well, Stu old buddy, as pissy
days go, this one wizzed all over
you. Your boss tore you out of
the frame, your wife hardly knows
you exist, your daughter is
smoking...

The more Stu subconsciously rubs the single coin, the more
it twinkles until it begins to glow.

STU
...and to top it off, you broke
the heart of the only person in
your life that even remembered
your birthday. Why do you have to
be such a loser?

Stu turns on the headlights, illuminating the centerfold of
the tropical island pinned to his pegboard.

STU
I’m so tired of my life. I wish...
I wish I could just be swept away
to my own, remote, island.

Push in on the glowing coin. A mysterious gust of wind blows through the garage. The clutch slips and the old bus lurches violently! Stu drops the coins and his head bounces off the
steering wheel!

INT. VW BUS - DAY

Stu lies across the steering wheel, facing the passenger
seat. The sun glaring in through the passenger side window
brings him to. He squints and blinks.

STU
( sarcastically )
Ow, that felt good. Oh man, it
can’t be morning. How long have
I been out?

He sees the coins lying on the floorboard. Now, there are
only two. He picks them up.

STU
What the...

As his eyes adjust to the bright sunlight, Stu looks out
the driver’s side window at his surroundings; white sand.

STU
This isn’t my house.

He turns to the passenger window as surf rolls up to the
bus tires.

EXT. BEACH - DAY


STU
( O.S. )
Oh my God!

Stu leaps from the bus passenger door, sloshing into the wet surf. He turns back and forth, confused. He looks up and down the white sand beach for signs of life. He looks from the ocean horizon to the tree line on land. He is all alone.

STU
This isn’t happening. This can’t
be happening! I’m dreaming. I
must be dreaming.
( pinches self )
Ow! I don’t get it.

FLASHBACK

BRAD
( V.O./flashback )
The crazy old fart at the pawn
shop said it has magic powers or
something. You know, three wishes,
that kind of thing.

INT. VW BUS - DAY

Stu climbs back in and sits in the driver’s seat in shock.

STU
Three wishes, I don’t believe
it... I just don’t believe it.
( then smiling slightly )
I don’t believe it.
( the smile broadens )
I don’t believe it! This is
the best birthday present ever!
( looking out the
passenger side )
My own private beach,
( turning to the
driver’s side window )
on my own private isl...yeow!!

A GIANT CEREMONIAL MASK is looking back at him through the
driver’s side window. The carved, wooden mask is as big as a
coffee table, completely concealing whoever or whatever is
wearing it. Stu dives for cover on the floor board, behind
his seat. He sits up, with his back against the side wall under the windows.
After a moment of heavy breathing, he musters enough courage to ease up and look out the window. There is nothing on the beach in any direction. He looks to the lush, tropical tree line and spots a slight rustling, but the wind picks up and all the bushes and palms begin to rustle.

STU
I must have hit my head harder
than I thought.

He looks at the coins in his hand as he climbs back into the
driver’s seat.

STU
Oh man, this is great.

He pockets the coins and starts the bus.

STU
My own private island. Let’s take
a little tour.

EXT. BEACH - DAY

Aerial view of the bus as Stu starts up the beach and
seagulls scatter in his path. Stu laughs with excitement
as the bus lurches along.

STU
( O.S.)
Yes! Woo, woo!.... Fantastic.

INTERCUT INT. VW BUS / EXT. BEACH - DAY

He drives along the surf’s edge sending up a rooster tail
of saltwater behind him and taking in the splendor of the
island. Stu’s P.O.V.; white sand, crystal clear, blue water,
sand pipers, pelicans and a flock of flamingos along the
shore, small monkeys and brightly colored parrots in the tall palms and other trees.

STU
Paradise, this place is paradise.

Driving along the coast, Stu spies a school of dolphins
jumping off shore.

STU
That’s beautiful...and that
reminds me!
He stops the van on the beach and starts rummaging through
it as if on a scavenger hunt. Tossing aside useless junk,
he finds Tiffy’s makeup carry-case and opens it and pillages through hair spray, blush and eye liner until he finds a box of assorted safety pins. He selects the biggest one.

STU
This oughta do.

Searching further, he finds a big cooler behind the rear
seat. He opens it to find only a jumbo, pre-packaged assortment of fireworks; sky rockets, smoke bombs and
sparklers.

STU
Looks like somebody’s planning
a big fourth.

There is a toolbox next to the cooler. Stu opens it to find
an assortment of odds and ends; knife, pliers, tin snips,
bungi cords and a big roll of speaker wire. Stu happily grabs up the wire and pliers.

STU
Perfect.

Stu bends the big safety pin into a makeshift fish hook and fastens it through the end of the speaker wire.

STU
Looks like I’m going fishing
today after all.

Giddy, he jumps from the bus and runs to the tree
line unraveling the spool of wire behind him. He finds a
thicket of bamboo, selects the perfect pole and snaps it
off at the ground. Next, he runs back to the bus, cuts the
wire and secures it to his new fishing pole.

STU
I’m the man! Just call me Mr.
Survival.

Stu throws off his shoes and splashes out into the surf.

STU
Bait! I need bait.

He goes back to the bus and spies the McDonald’s fries.

CUT TO:

Stu in knee high surf, his pants legs rolled up and the
order of fries protruding from his shirt pocket. He baits
his hook with a fry and casts.

STU
I sure hope you guys like Mickey
D’s. I’ve heard of fly fishing,
but never fry fishing. Hey, that’s
pretty good...ah, this is the life,
just wading in the surf and
drowning fries. Yep, today’s the
day I catch the big one.

Pan to the tree line. Branches part revealing the islander in the big ceremonial mask watching Stu.

Series of timelapse shots follow:

-Stu casting.

-Stu baiting hook.

-Stu swatting flies.

-Stu sampling a French fry out of boredom and then spitting
it out.

With each shot, the sun moves further across the sky and Stu’s fry supply grows smaller.

C.U. of 25 fries floating in a group about 100 feet off shore. Pan to Stu who is re-baiting his hook. He is down to
his last fry, so he breaks it in half and saves part of it
in his pocket.

STU
My last fry and not a nibble all
day. Just like back home.
( casting )
I just knew I was gonna catch a
whopper today. Maybe I’m using the
wrong bait.






STU
( continued )
Yeah Stu, everybody knows that in
taste tests, fish prefer Burger
King to McDonald’s two to one.
Of course, whopper - Burger King.
Now that’s funny. Why is it that
whenever I come up with a real gem,
there’s never anyone around to
hear it?

Stu checks his hook. The bait is gone. He retrieves his
last piece of French fry.

STU
Man, I wish I would catch just one
fish. I’m getting pretty hungry.

With that he clumsily drops the French fry in the water and
a big fish snaps it up!

STU
Hey!...Oh, that’s just great!
So now you like fries.

Stu scurries back to the van.

STU
At least now I know there are fish
in this ocean. I guess it just
wasn’t feeding time. Come on,
there’s got to be something else
I can use for bait.

He rummages around and finds a fast food bag crumpled up,
under the passenger seat. He opens it to find the remnants of a cheeseburger.

STU
Eureka!

While Stu is stooped over, a big shark fin crosses the frame
in the water behind him and disappears under the surface.
Stu runs back to the water’s edge. He picks up his pole
with his back to the water and excitedly baits his hook
with cheeseburger. The big fin crosses behind him in the
opposite direction and disappears again.



STU
This oughta catch a fish. Good
old, one hundred percent, U.S.D.A.
grade A, ground beef...or a
reasonable facsimile thereof.

He turns, splashes out into the surf and casts with all
his might.

STU
Okay big boys, let’s see you
resist this.

Stu begins humming and then singing the song Cheeseburger
in Paradise.

STU
( singing )
Mmm, mmm, mmm. I like mine with
lettuce and tomato, Heinz fifty-
seven and french fried potato,
big kosher pickle and a cold draft
beer, good God Almighty, which way
do I steer, for my cheeseburger in
paradise, just a cheeseburger
in para...

Wham! The hit on Stu’s line is so forceful that it jerks
him from his feet, face down in the surf. He comes up
spitting sand and shaking the salt water from his eyes!

STU
Well all right, this is more like it!

A mighty tug of war ensues with Stu making progress a few steps toward the bus and then being pulled a few steps back into the surf. Finally, Stu gets close enough to the bus to wrap his line around the bumper, securing it with several loops. He jumps in the VW bus and starts it up.

STU
Come to papa!

He tries to back up, but makes little progress before the
wheels spin in the wet sand. He shuts it down and jumps back out, grabs the taught line and follows it back into the surf.



STU
I’ve waited all my life for a
fish like you. You are not
getting away.

Chest deep in the water, Stu has just about reached the end
when the hooked, GREAT WHITE SHARK rears it’s tremendous,
ugly head.

P.O.V. from behind Stu looking at the shark. Stu’s frozen
frame is dwarfed by comparison, silhouetted against the
massive teeth baring monster.

The shark crashes back into the water with a thunderous
splash and the fin begins to circle a few yards in front of Stu.

Stu manages to get his legs working and rigidly starts backing up, trying to utter a single word that he can’t quite get out.

STU
Sh---, sh---, sh---

As he backs out of the surf onto land he finally gets it out.

STU
Shit.

The VW bus enters the frame, crossing behind Stu, slowly being pulled out to sea by the shark. Stu turns his head
to look at the moving bus momentarily, then, still in shock,
turns back to the shark.

STU
( doubletake )
Whoa, stop, halt!

Stu regains his senses and frantically tries to untangle
the line from the bumper. No good. He retrieves the pliers
to break through the tough wire, but before he can make any progress the bumper pulls loose from the bus and is dragged out to sea.

Stu scampers back into the bus and instinctively locks the
doors. He sits in the driver’s seat, mesmerized, staring out to sea. Something in the rear view mirror catches his eye.

Stu’s P.O.V. reflected in the mirror. There is something
stuck in the sand near the tree line.

STU
What the...?

Stu starts the van and goes to investigate. He pulls up and
gets out next to the object, a long sharpened pole with a
big fish impaled on the end of it.

STU
How did this get here?
( beat )
Oh, no.

FLASHBACK

STU
( V.O. / flashback )
Man, I wish I would catch just
one fish...

FADE BACK TO PRESENT:

STU
Don’t tell me I wasted a wish on
a dumb old fish.

Stu pulls out the coins and is relieved to find that he still has two.

STU
Whew, I didn’t waste one. But, I
don’t get it.
( Re: the fish )
If I didn’t wish you here, where
did you come from and how do
these things work?

FLASHBACK

Stu cleaning and rubbing the coins in his garage.

FADE BACK TO PRESENT:

STU
That’s it!

He quickly rubs one of the coins until it twinkles and then glows.

STU
Whoa, that is it. Okay, what do I
wish for? Wait a minute, two wishes
left. I better save these babies
for something really important...
( turning his attention
back to the fish )
...like a frying pan.

EXT. BEACH - NIGHT

Stu is seated on a driftwood log in front of a camp fire,
broiling his fish on a bamboo skewer.

STU
Fish, I don’t know where you came
from, maybe you felt so guilty
after eating all my fries you just
jumped out of the water and
impaled yourself on that pole. No
matter, cause when next I meet ya,
I’m gonna eat ya.

Stu laughs at his own pun and takes the fish from the fire
to check it.

STU
Man, I’m hot today.
( burns finger )
Ouch!

Push through the flickering flames and past Stu as he
gingerly eats his hot meal. Two palm branches part at the tree line behind him and the big ceremonial mask appears again and watches him eat. The menacing mask effectively hides the identity of whoever is behind it. The only part of
anatomy visible are the legs from the knees down.

Stu finishes his meal, licks his fingers and wipes his hands
on his shirt. He lights a cigarette with a stick from the fire.

STU
Oh man, this is the life.

He slides down onto the ground and leans back against the
log with his hands behind his head. Stu’s P.O.V. of the starlit sky.


STU
Just look at those stars. You
don’t see stars like this in the
suburbs, too many lights.
( yawning )
What should I do tomorrow?
( sarcastically )
Gee, I hope I don’t have to go
fishing again.
( beat )
( snores lightly )

The star lit sky fades to total black.

Bolt of LIGHTNING! Crack of THUNDER!

EXT. BEACH - NIGHT

The campfire is out. A sudden torrent of RAIN pours down.
Stu jumps to his feet confused and steps in the steaming
embers with his bare feet.

STU
Ow!

He hops around composing himself, limps to the bus and
scrambles inside.

STU
Note to self; build hut!

EXT. BEACH - DAY

At the tree line, there is a rustling commotion in the
thick, tropical undergrowth. Stu emerges from the jungle
onto the beach, his face obscured by the armload of palm
branches he carries.

He lugs them to his van and strategically places them onto a
makeshift awning he has constructed on the side of the bus.
These last branches complete the bamboo and palm structure.
Again the person in the ceremonial mask watches while hiding in the lush jungle growth. Stu stands back to admire his work.

STU
Just call me Robinson Crusoe.

He proudly leans against one of the bamboo supports and
the awning collapses. Stu falls in a heap among the palm
and bamboo.

STU
Umph!...Just call me Gilligan.

The masked islander shakes his head in disbelief.

EXT. BEACH - DAY

 

 

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