Shillelagh (2)
Emmett O Saunders Iii

 

Getting there.

JEAN
Not fast enough, I'll bet.

JIM
So if you're so rich... what are you doing
in this section of town?

JEAN
O'Connor's is the only decent restaurant in
town. As for my being here, let's just say my friends
have a notion... every now and then...to mingle
with the working class.

JIM
So why are you here talking to me?

JEAN
I need a man who's secure with himself.
Someone who isn't afraid of life. You look the type.

JIM
Thanks for that. But why the brisk come-on?

JEAN
It's exciting to see how a man responds.

JIM
Not very decent.

JEAN
Few things are these days. Listen, if you
want a place to stay tonight...

JIM
A place to sleep, you mean.

JEAN
It's a package deal.

JIM
I don't think so. I'm finally straightening out some
things about money and what it does to people.

JEAN
What does that mean?

JIM
People with money have no right to treat
other people like dirt.

JEAN
A hundred men would jump at the chance to sleep with ...

JIM
You? ... or what your money's made you?

(A moment of recognition for both, then Jean slaps Jim's face. She rises and rejoins her group.)

PAT
(coming over quickly)
What happened?

JIM
She made me an offer I couldn't refuse.

PAT
(pats his shoulder)
I'm proud of you, man. There aren't a lot of guys
who would pass up an opportunity like that.

JIM
Speaking of opportunities, what've you been up to over there?

PAT
Just checking into some things. That sale I
mentioned was for the shillelagh.

JIM
You sold it?

PAT
Five thousand dollars worth.

JIM
What?

PAT
You heard me. That was the price this old man offered for it.

JIM
He's gotta be senile! Nobody offers that kind
of money for a simple stick.

PAT
Maybe it's not so simple.

JIM
No more blarney, tonight...I can't handle it.

PAT
I suppose you think Saint Patrick didn't exist either?

JIM
He lived in Ireland. That's all I know.

PAT
Well, he wasn't from Ireland. His real name was Succat
and he lived in southwestern Britain until he was sixteen
years old. Then, Irish marauders carried him off into
captivity for six years. He spent the time tending sheep
in County Cannaught near the mountain Slemish. After seeing
a number of visions urging him to escape, he finally
did one night.

JIM
Where'd he go?

PAT
Northern coast of France, but you're getting ahead.
The night he left, several guards were standing watch on a
boat anchored along the coast. He didn't know how he
was going to stow away on board without them seeing him.

JIM
They would have discovered him later anyway.

PAT
Maybe. But he had another vision to take a big,
wooden stick and break it in half. Half, he used to
build a scarecrow. On the mountainside, it looked
like he was still watching the sheep.
The other half he used to sail past the boat.

JIM
So where's the shillelagh come in?

PAT
He used the same piece of stick that he eluded them with
for a walking cane. Later, it came in handy to drive
all the snakes out of Ireland.

JIM
Now that's a story!

PAT
Believe what you want, but the legend goes that
St. Patrick never forgot the stick's help and he often
grants wishes through a shillelagh.

JIM
Oh, come on now! Who do you think believes something like that?

PAT
Evidently the old man does. He's willing to pay
five thousand dollars.

JIM
It's ridiculous.

PAT
Old legends never die.

JIM
Well, maybe this one should.

PAT
And leave us penniless?

JIM
Well, maybe it could keep breathing until
after the check's cashed.

FADE TO:

INT. The apartment is darkened. Through a window a shadow can be seen moving toward the door. Scuffling sounds of a lock being jimmied are heard, then a figure snaps on a flashlight. The robber has returned, playing the beam around the apartment, then rests the light on the closet.

ROBBER
Seems like a logical place to hide it. Can't spend too much
time looking for the money. Cops are bound to be here soon.

(He opens the closet door and, being too short, looks around for a chair to reach the top shelf. Grabs one of the kitchen chairs, then returns to closet.)

ROBBER
It's always on the top shelf...(feels something slippery and jumps back, falling from his perch) What was that?
Felt like a snake!

(At that moment, sounds of singing drift in from off the street. Glancing at the door, he manages to replace the chair at the kitchen table and close the closet door before shadows move across the window. Seeking a place to hide, he finds the bathroom and vanishes inside as a key turns in the lock.)

PAT
(snaps on a light, singing)
When Irish eyes are smilin'...

(He finishes off a verse by himself, then Jim joins in on the chorus.)

PAT
(clasps Jim's shoulders)
That's my partner! I'll make an Irishman of you yet!

JIM
Irish from English? Don't be ridiculous!
It'd be easier to drive all the snakes from Erin's fair shores.

PAT
Ah, not so hearty! 'Twas done once before, you know.
We still have remembrances from his visit.

JIM
Like what?

PAT
(reaches into the closet and tosses the snake at Jim)
Like this!

JIM
Very funny! (trips over the shillelagh sticking out
from under the couch) Why don't you learn to put things away?

PAT
Sorry, I completely forgot about it. (takes the stick) I'll put it in the closet on the top shelf. It won't bother anyone there.

(He puts the shillelagh on the top shelf, then heads for the bathroom. He stops as the phone rings.)

JIM
Hello? (listens intently for several seconds) I understand.
We'll check around outside. Thanks for calling!

(As he hangs up, Pat eyes him carefully. A look of fear passes over Jim's features and is swiftly replaced by determination.)

PAT
What's up?

JIM
Sergeant at the cop shop. He said the man captured last night
in the alley is loose again. They're not sure, but he might be in the area. Someone phoned in an anonymous tip.

PAT
Nothing to worry about then. Just lock up like you said.

JIM
(quietly)
I'm not so sure. Said there was Irish music
playing in the background.

PAT
Guess we'd better tell Mrs. Peabody, in case she hasn't heard.

JIM
Why don't you go? I'll check everything in the apartment.
Make sure nothing's missing so far.

PAT
Be right back!

(Pat leaves. Jim stands unsteadily, then heads for the bathroom. Before he reaches the door, the robber appears and levels a gun at him.)

ROBBER
Value your life? Better stay calm.

JIM
What do you want?

ROBBER
(motions for Jim to be seated)
Good act, kid. I want the money. Where'd you hide it?

JIM
I don't know anything about money. Except you
need it at tax time.

ROBBER
Consider me an early collector on returns then.

JIM
(beginning to sweat)
I don't have it.

ROBBER
Not a very convincing performance. Maybe your partner knows?

JIM
Pat has no idea... I mean, I had it, but I threw it
back out in the trash where you left it.

ROBBER
Why don't I believe you?

JIM
Go on out and see for yourself. When I heard you
were loose, I figured you'd be back for it, so I just
heaved it back outside. It's there, ... go on, see for yourself!

ROBBER
(menacingly)
If it isn't there... you're gonna take its place for pickup!

(The robber heads out into the alley. Jim starts searching frantically for a hiding place.)

JIM
What am I gonna do?

(Pat enters, startling Jim.)

PAT
What are you doing?

JIM
The robber's here!

PAT
Is he armed?

JIM
Yes.

PAT
What's he doing here?

JIM
He wants his money. Said if he didn't find it,
I'm a dead man.

PAT
Have you got the money?

JIM
Yeah. It's in the closet.

PAT
Just give it back.

JIM
It's a fortune, buddy. We'd be set for life.

PAT
Which could be rather short if he doesn't get it back.

(Pat rushes to the closet and pulls the shillelagh from the top shelf.)

JIM
What good will that do against bullets?

PAT
Maybe stop them from being fired. (grasps the stick and
closes his eyes tightly) I wish we get out of this safely!

JIM
And just like that... it's gonna work?

(The sound of the front door handle draws their attention as it turns.)

JIM
He's back!

PAT
Take it easy, man.

(Both men are relieved as Mrs. Peabody enters.)

MRS. PEABODY
Hello, boys, ... it's me!

(Pat grabs her and slams the door behind her.)

MRS. PEABODY
Goodness, Pat...you look frightened out of your wits.

JIM
He is and so am I.

PAT
Mrs. Peabody, did you see the robber out there?

MRS. PEABODY
What does he look like?

JIM
Short, very dangerous.

MRS. PEABODY
Must have been that little man who asked me about the garbage.
I told him we just had a pickup not more than ten minutes ago.
He took off running through the alley and was nabbed by two policemen across the street. Guess they had the area
staked out after last night.

JIM
(beginning to smile)
They got him then and we got the money!

(He reaches into the closet to drag the moneybag out and comes up empty-handed.)

PAT
(kissing the shillelagh)
I think we got something more valuable than money out of this.

JIM
(feeling around on the top shelf)
It's not here...

MRS. PEABODY
What? That old dirty bag you had stashed up there?
I threw that out this afternoon when I finished cleaning.

JIM
(banging his head in despair)
No...no...

(A knock at the door draws their attention.)

JIM
(mouthing the words to Pat)
He's back!

PAT
(waving the shillelagh at him)
No match for this!

(He opens the door to a policeman.)

OFFICER
Just wanted to thank you folks for all your help
in getting the robber out into the open.

MRS. PEABODY
We were glad to do our civic duty, officer.

JIM
(relieved at the sight of authority in control)
He's really gone, then?

OFFICER
Oh, yes. And we should have the money
back after checking trash truck runs.
Only one runs through this whole area.

PAT
(setting the shillelagh beside the couch)
I'm just glad the whole thing's over.

OFFICER
Well, we'd like to finish the report downtown
if you wouldn't mind accompanying me.

MRS. PEABODY
Come on, boys. I'll fix a late snack when we get back.

JIM
(brightening)
That's worth staying up for.

PAT
(whispers to the shillelagh as they leave)
Don't worry! I'm not selling you to anyone.

(As the door closes behind them a faint wisp of green smoke changes to a dense cloud as an old man steps from the cloud.)

ST. PATRICK
Where are you, little one? (looks around the apartment quickly)
Ah, there you are ... (picks up the shillelagh)
Your work's done here. Time we moved on.

(He whistles an Irish air as he walks to the front door. It opens by itself. He pauses to look both ways before venturing into the light.)

ST. PATRICK
(patting the shillelagh)
A great many people need your help. (frowns slightly as he studies the inscription) But what they can't read ...
they can't use.

(EFX as he holds the shillelagh up and the Celtic inscription transforms into English. It reads:

Wish in need,
God's mercy receive

(His face beams as he turns and vanishes into smoke.)

EFX as smoke dissipates. MUSIC UP with theme as title appears, "The Cost of Higher Education". TITLE FADES.

CAMERA MOVES THROUGH SMOKE into

INT. Diner in a small town. Fairly busy lunchtime crowd is visible as an older waitress can be seen taking orders. A bus is visible through the front window, letting off a large crowd of high school children.

CAROL
(to cook)
Billy Ray! You better get Cassie off her break.
We got a load heading in.

BILLY RAY
(from the grill)
Carol, she had a pick up at the post office.
Won't be back for ten minutes.

CAROL
(glaring back)
Maybe I need to pick up something for myself.
(to herself) Like a last paycheck.

CUT TO: Another angle as St. Patrick appears behind her at the empty table. He is dressed conservatively.

ST. PATRICK
Oh, no, my dear. You must think about your daughter.
How would she be getting to college next year?

CAROL
(turning around, surprised to see him)
How'd you get in here? And how'd you know
Cynthia's going to college in the fall?

ST. PATRICK
(smiles back warmly)
How does anyone learn anything in a small town?

CAROL
OK, enough about me (taps her notepad)
You gonna order?

ST. PATRICK
I think you'll have plenty from them.

(He nods toward the door as the teenagers pour in.)

CAROL
(watching the rush of customers)
Got that right. Sometimes I wish there was
another diner to handle them on field days.

ST. PATRICK
Now, now ... (taps the shillelagh against the table)
Better be savin' a wish for your retirement!

CAROL
(laughs)
That's something I'll never see!

CUT TO: ANOTHER ANGLE as she turns back to find an empty table except for the shillelagh resting against it.

CAROL
Sir, if you're not gonna order ...
(pauses to lift the shillelagh)
Where'd he go?

(She glances quickly around the diner as the children's voices drown out her thoughts. Carol shrugs and sets the shillelagh aside in a corner.)

FADE TO:

INT. of same diner, early evening. Carol is seen wiping off the counters as Billy Ray is clearing the register.

BILLY RAY
Guess you'll be heading home, huh?

CAROL
Yeah. I gotta get some alterations done on Cynthia's gown.
Tomorrow's the big day.

BILLY RAY
(worried)
You'll still be here half-day, right?

CAROL
Since you didn't give me the day off,
guess I'll have to.

BILLY RAY
New girl be here next week for training.

CAROL
(continues straightening tables)
Well, if she's anything like Cassie, I'll be doing it myself.

BILLY RAY
(assuring her)
I spoke to her about all the breaks.
She agreed to cut back.

CAROL
Uh, huh. I hear ya. (picks up the shillelagh)
Wonder if he'll come back for this?


BILLY RAY
What's that? A cane?

CAROL
A walking stick for sure.
I think it's called a shillelagh.

BILLY RAY
(drawling an Irish brogue)
I used to own one of them.
Wouldn't drive worth a darn in cold weather.

CAROL
Not a car name, Billy Ray. My uncle had one of these.
Used to see it at his house every time we'd visit.

BILLY RAY
Well, you can't leave it here. Don't know how cured
the wood is ... might have bugs.

CAROL
I'll take it with me. If the old guy shows up again,
I'll just invite him over to get it back.

BILLY RAY
So that's how you get all your dates?

CAROL
(snaps back quickly)
Don't even go there!

DIFF ANGLE as she grabs her purse to leave.

CAROL
I'm outta here. See ya tomorrow.

BILLY RAY
Ok, bright and early, remember!
You're taking half-day.

CAROL
Gotcha covered.

(She leaves and heads for the parking lot. A man steps from the shadows between the buildings. Startled, Carol raises the shillelagh to defend herself.)

CAROL
(sternly)
Back off!

TJ
Hey, Carol. Didn't mean to frighten ya!

CAROL
(visibly shaken)
TJ, what are you doing here?

TJ
Remember the other day?
You said you wanted to talk about the insurance policy.

CAROL
Yes, but not here. (looks around nervously)
Too public...

TJ
We could go have a beer. Talk things over.

CAROL
Not a good idea.

TJ
(shrugs)
Open for suggestions?

CAROL
My place. In about an hour. I got alterations to do on
Cynthia's graduation gown anyway. Might as well kill
two birds with one stone.

TJ
Sounds like a plan.

WIPE TO:

INT. Carol's apartment. Sparsely furnished but comfortable. Cynthia is idly flicking through TV cable channels as she chats on the phone. As Carol enters, she hangs up hurriedly locking the station in place for a documentary safari.

CYNTHIA
(into phone)
Gotta run, she's here. (pretends to be absorbed by
the program) Hi, Mom. How's it going?

CAROL
I'm fine. Did you get the makeup test done?

CYNTHIA
Coach Bryant said I passed with flying colors.

CAROL
So why couldn't you do it right the first time?
Would have avoided a whole lot of trouble.

CYNTHIA
I'm graduating. Isn't that enough?
I mean, it's not like Dad's gonna show up, right?

CAROL
Do we have to bring him into this?

CYNTHIA
I guess not. Considering he hasn't taken any
interest in me since he left.

CAROL
I know, honey. I've tried to explain ...

CYNTHIA
Explain? (sterner) Explain what, Mom?
He's the best collegiate football coach in the business.
He takes time to watch every play. Counsel every player.
Even maps out career goals to the last detail ... for somebody else. But his own daughter? I'm a throwaway. Probably wishes he'd never had me.

CAROL
You can't mean that.

CYNTHIA
(calmer)
So now I'm graduating. And that should make a difference.

CAROL
I wrote and told him you'd finished.

CYNTHIA
(shocked)
You did what? I can't believe you did that.
I don't want him there.

CAROL
I just thought ...

CYNTHIA
You thought wrong.

(Cynthia stomps off down the hall. The slamming of her bedroom door jars Carol back into routine. She grasps the shillelagh tightly.)

CAROL
Dear God, I wish there was some way to reconcile this family.

(EFX as she sets the shillelagh down, unaware of a faint green glow that emanates briefly from the stick. She begins fixing a teapot of water and pulls out the graduation gown.)

CAROL
(to herself)
Bill, how could you do this to your own daughter?
She's so much like you it's scary. The same drive.
Ambition. She could go far. Given the chance.
But where am I gonna get that kind of money?

(A knock sounds quietly at the door. Carol opens it to find TJ.)

TJ
I know you said an hour. Kinda figured we could cut
through the business and get to the pleasure.

CAROL
Cynthia's in her room. Let's keep it business tonight, ok?

TJ
(disappointed)
Fine. (starts spreading papers on kitchen table) I checked all the premiums. You're good to go on paper. All paid up.

CAROL
No problem with her collecting?

TJ
Guarantee it.

CAROL
Do I have to be in the car?

TJ
Nowhere near it. Like I told you last week ... I'll take care of the car leaving the pavement. All you have to do...is make sure you're on the red eye to San Diego. (sees her hesitation) If you can't go through with it, now's the time to tell me.

CAROL
I can do it. She's got to have the money for college.

TJ
(pointedly)
You'll never see her again.

CAROL
Don't you think I know that? I'll miss everything in her life
from this point forward, ... her dreams, her heartaches,
her successes, her failures. Everything a mother needs to
share with her daughter. I'll never have it.

TJ
Then why do it?

CAROL
Because it's her one chance to get what she wants out of life.
And in getting that, my dreams for her will come true.

TJ
Then it's settled. Everything's set for tomorrow night.

CAROL
Her graduation night? It's too soon!
I never said ...

TJ
(nods to her as he leaves)
My advice to you is ... enjoy the next twenty four hours
with her. And hey... look at the bright side. You won't be working in that dump of a diner ever again.

(He leaves as she sinks slowly into a chair holding the graduation gown.)

CAROL
What have I done?

(Cynthia reappears at the corner of the kitchen.)

CYNTHIA
Mom, I'm sorry. I shouldn't have gotten mad at you.

CAROL
(bravely holding back the tears)
It's okay, honey. We all have our moments.

CYNTHIA
(brightening)
And tomorrow at graduation, I don't care if Dad
does show up. You're the only one I want there.

CAROL
(hugs her)
Thank you. It means a lot to hear you say it.

CYNTHIA
(holding up the gown)
Now, can we please get this done? I don't want to fall into
the graduation speaker, getting my diploma.

CAROL
Even if the speaker was Ricky Martin?

CYNTHIA
(grins as she thinks)
I might make an exception in that case.

WIPE TO:

INT. Diner. Early morning. Carol is absently going about her duties, glancing at the clock every few minutes. Billy Ray watches intently for several moments, then calls her behind the counter.

BILLY RAY
Hey, Carol. Let me see you a minute.

CAROL
What's up? I got those four tables to set before we open.

BILLY RAY
You don't look good.

CAROL
Thanks.

BILLY RAY
No, I mean ... heck, I don't know what I mean.
We've worked together a long time, what .... ten, twelve years?

CAROL
At least.

BILLY RAY
You ain't focused. Like something's pulling on your mind.

CAROL
So now you're a psychiatrist?

BILLY RAY
I know what I see. And what I don't see is you
paying attention to what you're doing.

CAROL
Well, maybe I shouldn't be doing it anymore?

BILLY RAY
So you're quitting?

CAROL
No, Billy Ray, I'm not. You know I got four more years
to get my daughter through college. And you know you've got
the only place in town for a washed up waitress.

BILLY RAY
Never said that. You're the best waitress in four counties.
Probably the state. Maybe the country. I'm glad you're here.

CAROL
I don't believe it. A compliment from you?

BILLY RAY
(mellowing)
You are good.

CAROL
There's always better.

BILLY RAY
(grins)
And worse.

CAROL
Serious though, Billy Ray. You meant what
you said about my work?

BILLY RAY
Yeah, but don't hold me to it for a raise.
I got enough on me just keeping this place going.

CAROL
You depend on me, then?

BILLY RAY
If you didn't show up every day ... I'd be shoving
the food in front of customers myself.

CAROL
I never thought about it that way.

BILLY RAY
Hey, if you can't depend on somebody,
you got no business working with them.

CAROL
Thanks, Billy Ray. It's a lot to think about.

FADE TO:

EXT. High school football stadium. Mid-afternoon. Stands are filled with anxious parents and Carol is just getting seated hurriedly as the band starts playing.

DIFF ANGLE as Cynthia waves from the football field where chairs are situated for the graduation. ANOTHER ANGLE as Carol waves back and then her attention is drawn to TJ standing by the entrance gate. He notices her and she knows he's checking to make sure she's following through on the plan.

CAROL
(to herself)
God, give me strength to get through this.

ANOTHER ANGLE as a hand taps her shoulder.

BILL
Maybe you could spread some of that strength around?

She turns and registers shock at her estranged husband.

CAROL
Bill! I didn't think you'd make it.

BILL
My own daughter's graduation from high school?
It's a big event, Carol. For all of us.

CAROL
Cynthia didn't want ... I mean ...

BILL
I know she didn't want me here. But if I hadn't come,
the bridge between us would have been damaged beyond repair.

CAROL
It already is.

BILL
I suppose so from where you sit.

CAROL
Don't make a scene.

BILL
That's not why I'm here.

CAROL
You don't skip half your daughter's life.
Then come waltzing back in for the grand finale.

BILL
(sterner)
She's always thought of you as the hero, right?
I'm not gonna dash her hopes. (looks around)
I think my seat's on the other side.

ANOTHER ANGLE as he leaves. TJ shoots her a dirty look, then vanishes back into the crowd. Carol manages to find a tissue in her purse to dab her eyes before the speaker begins the proceedings.

CAROL
(quietly)
Cynthia was right. I should never have reminded him.

SPEAKER
Today, our graduating class faces many challenges...

ZOOM TO CLOSEUP of Carol's eyes as she is viewing another high school graduation. Bill is receiving his diploma with honors. Carol watches as he leaves the dais and is hugged by his mother and younger version of herself.

BILL
Mother! (hugs her)
(kisses Carol on the forehead) Carol, how nice of you to come.

CAROL
Your mother said it would be alright.

MOTHER
Yes, Bill. She's got something to tell you.

BILL
(evasive)
Just think, Carol, next year you'll be walking up
these same steps.

CAROL
I know this isn't the right time. And definitely not
the way I wanted to tell you ...

BILL
Come on now. We can all talk later.

CAMERA FOLLOWS as he tries to hurry her away but his mother's hand on his arm stops him cold.

MOTHER
This can't wait.

BILL
(smiling)
Serious? On a day like today?

CAROL
We're gonna have a baby.

BILL
(eyes widening)
You must be kidding!

MOTHER
This is not a joking matter, son.

BILL
Well, she's mistaken. It must be ...

CAROL
Oh, no ... it's yours...and mine.

BILL
(totally shocked)
But my plans ... the university...

MOTHER
Plans change ... in their own way.

FADE TO:

EXT. Current graduation. Cynthia is seen walking across to receive her diploma. Carol awakens from her daydream long enough to snap a picture from her vantage point.

ANOTHER ANGLE as Cynthia descends from the platform and Bill smiles at her in front of flashes going on around them. She freezes for a moment as he presses an envelope into her hand.

BILL
Congratulations, princess. I knew you could do it.

CYNTHIA
(controlling herself)
Thanks, sir.

CAMERA FREEZES on Bill's silhouette as Cynthia moves off into the crowd.

WIPE TO:

INT. Carol's apartment. Cynthia is preparing for a night on the town. Carol is battling her feelings over her last few moments with her daughter.

CAROL
You won't be too late?

CYNTHIA

 

 

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