AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (15) As They Say (Poetry) The poem I wrote after she left me. [62 words] Iron Bell (Songs) This is a song my band covered. I don't want it to die. [116 words] Judith And The Elevator (Plays) I wrote this play for a festival a while ago. I was rather pleased with the performance. [1,921 words] [Cooking] Lover's Thoughts (Poetry) In this crazy messed up world isn't that what it's all about? [40 words] Luggage (Plays) A "farse" about a small town home. [1,899 words] Nighttime (Poetry) This is the story of the night passing. [79 words] Place (Poetry) I wrote this the other night before noon. [56 words] Questions (Poetry) My latest work, a triumphant return to the pen. [105 words] [Western] Rain (Is What This Poem Would Have Been Called) (Poetry) I wrote it in the rain. [175 words] Raisin In The Sun (Songs) It's a song based on a movie, based on a screenplay, based on a poem, based on a dream [202 words] Regret (Poetry) Another one of my remourseful poems. It's about a girl, who got away. [88 words] Road Runnin (Songs) The first title my band ever did. Just playing around y' know? Having fun. [149 words] The Canister (Poetry) - [56 words] The Gorbechev Song (Songs) This is a comedic song I wrote for history class, dedicated to my favorite soviet leader. [182 words] [Comedy] The Master (Poetry) This is one of my angry at mankind poems. A lot of people think it's about god by the title, then they read it. [77 words]
Funnel Fizzgig McArthur
reaching not grasping, emotions always growing inquiring not asking, exploding, not knowing Hiding, not masking which ones will be showing staying not lasting and whom Išll be owing
A funnel for my thoughts, though so many to choose A pencil, computer, easel, the blues day dreaming, athletics, but which one to use as a portal for my feelings, and through it they ooze
Happiness sadness anger dismay the colors flow , as do the notes that I play Harmony, dissonance, line, array rhyme and reason, this is the way
Expression, though everyonešs is not the same you need it for all your thoughts to be tame whether music, or drawing, or playing the game Venting your feelings will help keep your name
READER'S REVIEWS (6) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"This is a good one. " -- Author's comments.
"This is my favorite of the 3, keep writeing, you are good." -- Alucard996, Wauwatosa , WI, usa.
"Very enjoyable poem and very true. Thanks for sharing it with us." -- Maryla .
"Cool rhyme scheme and flow, though some lines seemed stressed, so work on it. As for the message-I give it a Hurrah! I was going to bash it, as, well...you're an arrogant son of a b**ch (This is a Good One!-Author's Comments), but you had every right to tote your poem in such cockiness. Hehe...check out my own poem *coughshamelessplugcough* The Golden! It is a good one! ;-)" -- Tyrant.
"I love you Jesse." -- Lindsay.
"I like this piece a lot. The first 4 lines reminded me of the boat scene on willy wonka and the chocolate factory when wonka is talking all rhymey and stuff. uh huh...." -- Michelle W., Topeka, KS.
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